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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Without Words Three words in which to say what I feel for you But do you think I can say them? no, I can’t it’s true I can make the strong man weep tears of joy or sorrow My words can tell a story of a yesterday or tomorrow My dictionary and thesaurus hold the words within their covers those words I’ve read countless times written by so many others Do you think I can write them here upon this page in black or will they stay upon my lips unsaid, so I can’t take them back If you knew how much I need to tell you how I feel if only I had those three words my love I could reveal. |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Same here.....I don't have the words or the guts....I could relate to this.  ~sky I'm in charge, and I say question authority! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetdeVine~ This is a marvelous piece~ Your rhyme is right on and it flows beautifully~ I really, really like it~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
I LOVE YOU TOO PDV |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Three words in which to say what I feel for you But do you think I can say them? no, I can’t it’s true ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sometimes it is just too difficult. Good write! ~Hugs~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I liked what you said, and didn't say! I don't know, but I tend to think words are never enough, it is more about how we go about making our feelings known. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Do you think I can write them here upon this page in black or will they stay upon my lips unsaid, so I can't take them back If you knew how much I need to tell you how I feel if only I had those three words my love I could reveal. ================================ methinks you just did anyway  a poet always finds a way. Love the word play on the theme of this..and the cadence. a bittersweet beauty here...Well done poetess D  how about how good it feels to finally forgive you |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
With No words Yes, dear, I know Sometimes words go Just Fly away somewhere, someplace Leave an empty longing face With no good words there to say I love you, today. But all the while You still have your smile Radiating bright sunshine Your finest, kindest kind of wine That steals my soul just ev'ry time Your very special way, to say I love you, today. And darling, you are always heard With no words. ((Poet deVine)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
I could completely understand, or at least in my mind, the meaning behind these words. this was my favorite stanza... "My dictionary and thesaurus hold the words within their covers those words I’ve read countless times written by so many others" that summed it all up for me. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
friglog JThere is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for your kind words...my muse has been in hiding lately and I dug this one out of my archives. Sigh. Thanks!!!  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sharon darling girl OH MY this is so amazing, a simply stunning example of form. You really do write with light. Absolutely awesome writing skills Always your work is a delight, this is awesome yes please more more more   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
*smiles* knowing you, this could be ambiguous and not maen what everyone my be led to think it means... heh hugs you |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
After having my unwise utterances counted and deemed excessive, I've banned certain words from my vocabulary... perhaps the same three? *S* I like the gentle longing of this very much, PDV... it sits softly on my heart. *S* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's amazing what you'll find in those archives. . . nice to see this one. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling at C's reply--how true! I love you!  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"If you knew how much I need to tell you how I feel if only I had those three words my love I could reveal."  (smiles) Oh Sharon, I am so happy you dug this out of the archives to share with us all again, sweet friend, this is wonderful! (sigh) I think we can all relate to this first impression, just because we don't wnat to make fools out of ourselves in case love would reject us! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, your words always say so much, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sharon~ When you find them, be sure to write them down to share....I, too, have been looking for awhile now... Lauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-18-2002 06:05 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Poet deVine - sadness is of your words my friend, mine are also felt at this time. The words to be said, if only one could, and if only one would listen. Peace be with you... BC |
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