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The Next In Line
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The Next In Line |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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The Next In Line Somehow, I am in the center of divine Swarming in the hearts of the righteous at last Just longing in the arms of the longing And, dwelling in places I never knew I could have... Sometimes I'm given a brief moment to touch the sun To find it is you who's carrying me this high It isn't often that I'm given warmth in this way So, I give praise in your effortlessly lift to the skies... Each and every time I hear that thunder roll I run for shelter even deeper in my mind I expect the rain but much the same you've never allowed it to fall hard So, I pray you're rewarded with extra kindness and the next in line... Now, I have been awake all night trying to get it right Oh, just what is there I could give back to you You were the one to reach me so gentle and completely Here's wishing you're next in line to soar the blue skies, too... How you have been there when I've been everywhere And, still knowing you could take all the pain away Then these words came to me and more then you'll believe I asked God to help me with what I'm trying to say... I see, I do see you, as that light that guides my way I feel you, like I'm dreaming, praying I never wake I need you like an angel needs the miracle of night And, I love you, like that awesome light, lighting up my life... Oh, I think of where we've been and every now and then It surely takes my every breath away My life will never be the same and still all that remains Is this poem, my gift, I give to you today... Somehow, I am in the center of divine But it's you that deserves to be next in line I'm still praying you receive more then life can bring Another prayer that you're next in line to get your wings... Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a gift. . . yes, that's a good way to put this. . .  wonderful my friend. . . from the heart. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Thank you, John, for reading this. I'm glad you liked it. Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiufl, sweet friend, I dream ever so much of being the next in line for I love my dream girl Joanna soooooo much and dream of being with her for the rest of my life! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always touch my heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-17-2002 04:14 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Refreshing...James |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
saunni~ this is such a gorgeous poem. to whomever it is written to...they sure are a lucky person indeed...you have a beautiful heart my dear friend and i hope it's you whose "next in line" to get all she deserves and more. my sweet friend i hope life finds you with all the love and happiness your heart can hold...beautiful write... lovely heart! take care girlie, and i'll be in touch soon. im sorry i havent been around lately...life is just CRAZY ;-) Take care  amy "you can't stop the rain from pouring down can't stop the world from turning 'round can't stop me from loving you no matter what you do" [This message has been edited by Aimster (04-17-2002 04:55 PM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Sauni, you write with the beauty of angelic singing. Every word and every thought radiates divine inspiration. I pray that God continues to give you His finest blessings. Your poem is awesome. Thanks for sharing it. ((Sauna)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Saunni darling girl OH MY! stunning. Truly you’ve outdone yourself in this excellent write this is such an amazing poem, the images in it are so clear and focussed. I love it Utterly utterly wonderful writing   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Saunni~ Just lovely~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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