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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-04-17 11:53 AM


persuading fingers
the sensory perception
between two lovers

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
haydenjames
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1 posted 2002-04-17 11:55 AM


my fingers gasping
dwells between yours
we evelope and munch this moment.

My poetry is at:  http://www.thehayden.org

Honeybee
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2 posted 2002-04-17 11:57 AM



Me likes!     You are so good at these!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2002-04-17 11:57 AM



softer touch implies
education in roaming
lighter still lighter

haydenjames
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4 posted 2002-04-17 12:05 PM


Unsure of boundaries,
the delight.
caressing touches closer than law.

My poetry is at:  http://www.thehayden.org

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5 posted 2002-04-17 12:10 PM


ah..I see you have captured this essence in so few words ... again I applaud your talents my friend.


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6 posted 2002-04-17 12:18 PM


Bob darling boy OH MY this is what I was talking about, it’s utterly utterly breathtaking in its beauty. YOUR writing is utterly utterly beautiful, soft and awesome in it’s uniquely picturesque way. Absolutely first class

I love it darling boy absolutely love it. YOU are extremely good at writing these


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Enchantress
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7 posted 2002-04-17 12:18 PM


your fingers trace me
as your eyes drink in my curves
you ask without words

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2002-04-17 12:33 PM


Interloper,
Enjoyed, a good one.

Honeybee
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9 posted 2002-04-17 12:38 PM



Nancy, your senryu is awesome!

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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10 posted 2002-04-17 12:49 PM


InterLoper~

'persuading fingers
the sensory perception
between two lovers'


Now THIS brings a *BIG SIGH* of satisfaction~

Gentle persuasion
Exploring the all of you
Destination met~


*Hugs* n' *Sighs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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just out of reach
11 posted 2002-04-17 01:50 PM


      
        skin begging for touch
   your hands masked in velvet gloves
          gliding up my arm
love this one!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Mistletoe Angel
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12 posted 2002-04-17 03:06 PM


fingers envelop
courtship sung in F minor
recording loves accord



(smiles) YAY!!! Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, this is a wonderfully enchanting piece of true love! (big hugggssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2002-04-17 04:22 PM


You've got that magic touch...the one I love so much...James
catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
14 posted 2002-04-17 04:24 PM


Add another sigh to the group
Sandra

SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet
15 posted 2002-04-17 05:36 PM



And yet another sigh

trembling fingertips
tip-toe around tingling curves
tremors sent through skin




Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
16 posted 2002-04-17 06:02 PM


Wow to all of you guys
This is the most fun ... reading your poetic replies ... and the biggest honor as well

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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17 posted 2002-04-18 01:11 PM


No poetic response from me... (it's tough enough to organize my thoughts into a semi-coherent state *G*... to do it in 17 syllables is impossible! LOL) just sincere appreciation. *S*
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In Your Poetic Mind
18 posted 2002-04-18 01:12 PM


Interloper~

a few different images ran through my mind with this one....indeed all were delightful....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

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