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Open Poetry #20

The Building Of Today

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-04-17 11:28 AM

The Building Of Today

once again
I shall retrace
the terrain of you
where familiarity
becomes a
different view
touching
the thin lines
of highs and lows
altering a map
long traveled
now in transpose
finding yesterday
gone
yet today being
the time of birth
re-exploring each inch
of sea, air,
and earth
each grain
of sand moved
and moments
slipped away
shall be
a new path
the building of today

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (04-17-2002 11:52 AM).]

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-04-17 11:35 AM

Your writing is like a map of your inner journey, which is how it should be. I like how you include the elements, and the tone is like that of eavesdropping on you having a conversation with your soul.

It's wonderful to read you again, h.

and it's great to be home.

haydenjames
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

2 posted 2002-04-17 01:40 PM

I really am in love with your style and how it flows....................

My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-04-17 05:32 PM

BRAVO!!! Oh Helen, this is wonderful, your words draw out an atlas of truth and chart a territory of promises I know you will encounter with all my heart! (kiss on cheek) This is smooth and fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2002-04-17 08:00 PM

Helen, I love this! What a wonderful message within your words

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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