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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-04-17 11:17 AM


Circle The Circle

Circle the circle
Unbroken circle shows
the way, guides the heart to
place to stay. Frees the soul from
shadowed care. Gifts mind with the when
and where. Lift’s the lid on futures view
Sees the promise of me and you. Don’t hold
back on what you seek. Look within take a
peek. Two becomes the strength of one
bound together life begun. Joined in
harmony, United in love’s eternity
linked circle’s of purity. Showing a
part of circles grace. A symbol for the
human race. Unbroken circle complete and
whole. The mirror of the perfect soul. No gaps
to let the evil in. No imperfection in its skin. Now
link the circles and form a chain. Two together will
keep out rain. Strength lies in soul’s unity. A hope
of what could be. One alone can walk too far. Two
can see the guiding star. Hearts don’t need to lift
their voice. Soul’s together have more choice
Separate the links, they are complete.
But together the chain won’t fear
defeat. Circle the circle

Marsha

Krissy beloved daughter I think you’ll find that puts me so far ahead of you that you’ll be eating my dust for a little while yet. I would say that’s about 100 points wouldn’t you? Mmmmm? You can try to catch up if you like. Try as hard as you like darling



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

[This message has been edited by Marsha (04-17-2002 12:11 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-04-17 11:59 AM



Well just shut my mouth and circle me in....

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2 posted 2002-04-17 12:54 PM


MarshaLove~
You've done an AMAZING job on the beauty of this piece~
You KNEW I'd love it ... and you're oh, so right !
Beautifully sculpted dear poetess~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 2002-04-17 01:13 PM


sis,

this is so beautiful both in form
and expression...i also love the blending
of colors...very beautiful to the eye!
yes this will be a hard one for krissy
to beat, but i sure look forward to
watching the magic from her pen too!!
love you both.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

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4 posted 2002-04-17 01:56 PM


Marsha, darling girl, this is a fabulous piece of art that could only come from you. I am dazzled by your talent and joyfully imbibe the wine of your pen. You are fanatastic, terrific and beautiful as well. It is an honor just to read your beautiful words of enlightenment. I thank Him for your blessed poetry.

This is no beginnng; there is no end
When we all join in spirit everywhere
Only joy and peace when circling friends
Giving love, making more pure beauty there.

And so, I do, accept your hand in joy
To join your circle, dancing to His gait
For I believe all happiness employs
Pure love we share in circling heaven's gate.

((Marsha))
-newell
  

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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5 posted 2002-04-17 02:01 PM


"let the circle be unbroken"  Well done. Enjoyed this. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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6 posted 2002-04-17 05:22 PM




(smiles) YAY!!! Ooohhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, may you and your daughter forever bond together in the circle of love and forever find true happiness in each other! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, now let us see what Krissy has up her sleeve, hehehehehe! We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


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7 posted 2002-04-17 05:26 PM


This is certainly a tough act to follow!  Great.

"I think I go home."
(Garbo)

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