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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Forever It cultivates the awe of more, Eternities forever door. There is no present as such, All is the past that you touch. So Fill your cup with rich red wine And sip it slow while you dine. Time seduces all the new, Ever changing externals view. Weather Waiter, wisher watcher or both, On this I will take an oath, There are things we'll never know, Be content your embers glow. Once Touched it turns to another stay A stock to build upon its way A flower with a day of sun One of many that has begun. Then Glowing embers grow to gray, Gray turns dust and blows away. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Sy...you wrote a Keeper...thanks for sharing your worldly weighty wisdom for all the parts were special... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, As you are special to me.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Time seduces all the new, Ever changing externals view. ======================== Waiter, wisher watcher or both, On this I will take an oath, There are things we'll never know, Be content your embers glow. Once Touched it turns to another stay ============================== Glowing embers grow to gray, Gray turns dust and blows away. ============================== *smiling at you and your tender touch* How appropriate it tis that I read this *sigh* from your pen as the sunrises out my window in a display of rose and violet... HOW did you do that?  *L*Good timing and connections me thinks LOL thank you for this keeper me Stinkylove...more soul poetry for my Sy collection. ~*~ Not all that's gold will blow away, the love that grew, will in constance stay. Some things sustain beyond the passage of time ... wisdom and truth remain, engraved in verse and rhyme. Yes, there are things we will never know, but in time all things meant to be will show. Like the sun and moon in promised rise ... like the seasons change will bring the butterflies. Somethings cannot be measured by commitment of time ... Some say forever is found in contentment's kiss of sublime. ~*~ *winkiewinkie*   [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (04-17-2002 08:25 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
enjoyed this... a nice rhyme and flow plus the added thoughts it made me ponder this morn... good stuff! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I love your flower and butterfly paste It has a lovely and beautiful taste. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky.  Capt Hair, Thank you for the good stuff. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy this is totally awesome writing, I’m stunned into speechlessness and as you know that rarely happens. Truly outstandingly beautiful writing. There is so much truth in these and together they are awesome. you are a very wise and clever soul. Excellent writing darling boy utterly utterly excellent As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
My daily sigh... Thank you. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sy, I love this! I can never top JM's replies. But, I hope that my sincere admiration for your talent will suffice. And, I will forever be a fan of your poetry! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Seymour...so tender and touching. Love the presentation as well. ~Hugs~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, I just love your flattery. Serenity, And my daily thanks to you. Melissa, Just a simple reply does worlds. Enchantress, Thank you and hugs back. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
VERY well done my friend....Excellent Sy. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is wonderful!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You exhale such beautiful poetry and I breathe it in~ Caught up in the *sighs* of you~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, Thank you my friend. Nightshade, Thank you for the wonderful Chris. Marge, And I love you too, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Wow, ooohhhhhh...I love how this smoothly oozed down the page like the wine in your words, sweet friend, this is a wonderful unique style of yours yet! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so uch, sweet friend, this is superb! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Always a pleasure to read your replies. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy dropped by for a second read, and it isn’t any flattery it’s true. You manage to capture the soundless thought in crystal streams of wonder then you dip your pen into the ink of poetic think and write, oh how you write. Utterly utterly wonderful writing, always a delight to read you darling heart   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, OK then your on my lover list. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sy, You have a regular love fest going here. What is that stuff when it's powder, anyway? I love your work but this is getting out of control here pal!  You're supposed to use words not magic to seduce.It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
His words ARE magic, Larry. |
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