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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-04-17 12:37 PM



Wearing A Groove

Here again as always
Upon the same track
Going a step forward
With a few steps back

Fell into the same rut
I can’t seem to move
The humdrum decline
Was wearing a groove

Well worn and jaded
Days much the same
Of treadmill routines
All flat and mundane

The dull boring track
In a monotony maze
Boring is plain to see
Was one of them days

Hope©2002

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Larry C
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1 posted 2002-04-17 01:15 AM


HopeS,
They may not be great,
But it's nice to ruminate.
There is an option instead,
I don't want to be dead.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

HopeS
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2 posted 2002-04-17 01:21 AM


Thanks Larry
deep in thought
chewing my cud
yes this silly old cow
is looking good
Hope


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3 posted 2002-04-17 10:47 AM


I find the worst part of falling into a boring groove is that I come to like it and resist leaving. *S*

I enjoyed this very much, Hope. *S* May today be better. *S*

HopeS
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4 posted 2002-04-17 10:53 AM


Thanks suthern , yes sometimes we do want to be left alone , but my day did improve , the latter half of the day I was lifted
Hope

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5 posted 2002-04-17 07:00 PM




(sigh) I too know this nothing-doing days ever so much, sweet friend, it too always feels like a treadmill practice to me too but I know as long as we stay truue to our hearts, life will always open up with much more to offer! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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