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The meaning |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Is in the definition, in the tense you derive; in the contradiction, in the sense that's contrived in the evolvement of the banal into creative forms in the decernment of a voice whose message is worn. in the answer of the question in the transfer of our attention received in the idle time of day when hunter cavorts with prey with the reception of company deeds or with pigeons that flock for some feed. in the recognition of the passages that were scrolled in the cognition of the messages that were told. in the answer of the question in the transfer of our attention. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (04-16-2002 10:35 PM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
this poem deserves to be read |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yes it does, and I did. Not sure why no one else replied, but I like the philosophical edge of it, but it does make one think, and some are just sometimes too busy or too uncomfortable to pursue. But I enjoyed the theme of a shift of focus being so pertinent. I am still pondering, too... I will be back. (and hey, keep don't be discouraged, keep 'em coming!  ) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Yes, this poem indeed should be and deserves to be read, and I am so happy I was able to find this! (big huggssssss) I too feel that we always seem to underraste the meaning because we are so busy and that we should all find the time to train ourselves to overlook this all! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Of course it deserves to be read, Ecrivan...and I get to them sooner or later. [Psst...check discernment...] I like the ebb and flow of this, and it does raise some discussion. I've read it four times. I get the feeling that what is being said is that we ask the questions, but we hardly wait around for the answers... how far off base am I? |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Serenity, I know why poems like these are not easily commented on, and that's due to the subject matter I choose from time to time; the moderators though are quite good at getting back and I am pleased with their input and exchange of views..glad you're pondering |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hi Vandana, I said to myself if I can get vandana to comment on one of philosphical take-offs then it's going to appeal to a whole lot of people who are intuitive of the subtlness of my writes. Thanks Vandana |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Karilea, You are not off base at all, there is a hitch to our refusal to stay around long enough to understand that the questions are there for us to answer but we're so busy devising so many schemes of approach that events slip by...and the questions go unanswered...there is another angle of our lack of interpretation even if we were able to perceive what is happening around us. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Noah, I am aware that you are busy at your tasks and always appreciate your comments |
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