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Indigo Indications........
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Indigo Indications........ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 We were poetic pictures sadness spilling onto canvas in fragments of blue fade, and shadow shapes seeing questions repeated in patterns of 'I need to know' I searched for meaning in the cobalt blur hoping to find the hidden meaning or message before the paint dried and with a grateful heart image becomes clearer indigo indications that every thing would be right as time passed, and the picture cured…… ~SEA~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh yes, yes, I know with all my heart that in the end everything will be alright and your love will grow only richer as time will ease the hurt! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, this is a wonderful portrait of words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
We were poetic pictures sadness spilling onto canvas in fragments of blue fade, and shadow shapes seeing questions repeated in patterns of 'I need to know' I searched for meaning in the cobalt blur hoping to find the hidden meaning or message before the paint dried ==================================== A haunting write of a need to understand the ache... a different kind of ache..but an ache unending never the less.... poignant write Sea....superb use of color and metaphor. how about how good it feels to finally forgive you |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thanks Noah, in time it will all be ok....it's one foot infront of the other right now  Janet, I'll email you tomorrow....yes, the ache of trying to heal a little one's hurts is very trying on a mom's heart....  thank you |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very beautifully done Sue, I do hope that goodness is ahead for you...as this poem so well states... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Magnus, thank you very much |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
hoping to find the hidden meaning or message before the paint dried and with a grateful heart image becomes clearer indigo indications that every thing would be right as time passed, and the picture cured…… ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Beautifully penned Sue... so full of ache and wonder... and a perfect picture too! ~Hugs~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What delicate sadness you have written... and the picture is the perfect accompaniment. Excellent work! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a Keeper... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sea, this was a beautiful reflection of your loving heart, and the ache in it...i love the graphic you chose to go along with it just perfect as is your writing... take care. love ya, amy "you can't stop |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
hugs you very well done. C |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Beautifully tender expression gal~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Man oh man...this is just lovely and going into my library. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Susan, when you write beauty as you do, you make everything become all right for souls like me. Thank you for your wonderful inspiration. ((Susan)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like this Susan. Really well done. The words paint the picture as well as the actual picture. Sandra |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Always a perfect picture from you SEA~ Your poetry is captivating with a magical touch of color that runs off the page. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
It's so difficult when someone you love is hurting and you can't 'make it go away,' especially when it's your child....well done SEA...and the painting is beautiful. Very good work.  ~sky I'm in charge, and I say question authority! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, Wonderful write and awesome analogy. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
SEA, very well said, TRUE that every thing would be right as time passed, and the picture cured…… I love to nice poetry. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I'm popping in for a few minutes Susan, while most at Nan's are asleep. This is beautiful ... lovely phrasing throughout, with a gentle pondering. Much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Bravo! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much...things are getting better for her. and Wasi!!! so nice to see your name again |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
The rainbow of life always reveals in colors of the heart. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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