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Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

0 posted 2002-04-16 08:11 PM

I can't describe this inner feeling
When I am out there in the night
It's like a room without a ceiling

The whole sky is so appealing
When the stars are shining bright
I can't describe this inner feeling

For the soul, it sure is healing
Shine upon by soft moon's light
It's like a room without a ceiling

You can see me swiftly reeling
With my arms held open wide
I can't describe this inner feeling

And almost daily I am dealing
With this awsome pretty sight
It's like a room without a ceiling

Maybe I should just be kneeling
Grab the earth and hold her tight
I can't describe this inner feeling
It's like a room without a ceiling

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2002-04-16 08:41 PM

Nicely done villanelle, Titia.

~sky

I'm in charge, and I say question authority!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2002-04-16 08:57 PM

Titia, this is beautiful and I am adding it to my library. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-04-16 09:01 PM

Titia, this is very well done!
Great imagery as well..
Enjoyed so much.
Hugs.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-04-16 09:01 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, your wonderful words always amaze me! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is another wonderful villanelle! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2002-04-16 09:26 PM

I can't describe this inner feeling
When I am out there in the night
It's like a room without a ceiling

The whole sky is so appealing
When the stars are shining bright
I can't describe this inner feeling

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"It's like a room without a ceiling"

How cool of an analogy is that!!
Wonderful flow to this Titia...you made it look easy...Did Nan proud too.
Well done Poetess

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2002-04-17 09:57 AM

How very beautiful! *S* "a room without a ceiling"... I love that image!

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