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Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

0 posted 2002-04-16 02:26 PM

Mellow Words

From the chill of a long cold winter

I awakened to the glow of your bright
laughter.

In the warmth of your mellow words

dormant buds began to swell.

And now your whisper stirs the leaves
of my tree

and wings sing.

"As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it." Wendell Berry

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2002-04-16 03:08 PM

And now your whisper stirs the leaves
of my tree
and wings sing.

I like this very much, Krawdad... particularly these last lines. *S* It seems so many people bellow to be heard... when mellow causes listening. *S*

haydenjames
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

2 posted 2002-04-16 03:22 PM

I'm floored! Very impressed... not doubt your on the next level where I'm not even sure I'll ever be.

Great write!

My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org

[This message has been edited by haydenjames (04-16-2002 03:23 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-04-16 03:31 PM

They say if you want to get someone's attention...whisper
...and in this case whispered mellow words
made me want to listen and ask..
...more please?
Very well written...
Enjoyed,
Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2002-04-16 09:52 PM

Krawdad

Must be spring...lovely!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-04-16 09:58 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooo pretty, sweet friend, your gorgeous wings always spread wings across these pages through your wods whispers! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2002-04-17 12:54 PM

e...this is just beautiful...h

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2002-04-17 12:56 PM

Simply beautiful!

It's a keeper~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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