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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-04-16 12:58 PM



Twogether

~*Marge Tindal~

Just the way
it's meant to be
Twogether in love
foreverly~

You and I in heart's adorn
The greatest love we've ever worn
Shared in countless memories made
Twogether in sweetest serenade~

Each step twogether
that we now ascend
Brings us closer twogether
than we've ever been~



This one is for you, Bill
~Have I told you lately that I love you~
~Well, I most definitely do~
April 16, 2002


And thanks again to my friend, June,
for the inspire word 'Twogether'~
Hope you like where it waltzed~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-16 02:00 PM


Yeahhhhh Marge~

wonderful use of the two words...loving this... here's to forever....(for you and bill)

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

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2 posted 2002-04-16 02:11 PM


Twogether foreverly... sometimes a love is so special it needs new words. *S*

I love this tender declaration, Marge... and I know Bill will, too... Give June a big thumbs up from me! *S*

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2002-04-16 02:27 PM


Marge,
Enjoyed together thanks for posting.

haydenjames
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4 posted 2002-04-16 02:48 PM


Really like this one...

My poetry is at:  http://www.thehayden.org

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5 posted 2002-04-16 03:09 PM



Marge~ Awwwwww!   My heart smiles a big grin from this one.

*hugs*
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2002-04-16 03:26 PM


GreenEyes~
I appreciate it~  Worked well for me in this write of the heart~

SuthernGal~
You got that right !
And my foreverly is perfect when we are twogether~

Tee-Hee-Hee ... Bill says that breaking it down into syllables it's TO-GET-HER ... and he did !
for June !!

Seymour~
Awwww, thank you kind sir for the read and always sweet reply~

HaydenJames~
Thank you so much ... glad you enjoyed it~

SmittenKitten~
Awwww, you're such a sweetie~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~


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7 posted 2002-04-16 05:30 PM


Marge:  Thanks for sharing your special feelings for Bill, with all of us. This is a charming poem!

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2002-04-16 05:34 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my heart this is utterly utterly delightful and I love it. I’ve been itching to get to this all afternoon, but YOU know who has been sitting here preventing me. Tis a good job I adore her isn’t it I love it and so does Krissy. She says the only thing that would make it better is if she could put a swirl on it. She’s obviously hooked on swirls

Wonderful writing darling heart utterly utterly wonderful

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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9 posted 2002-04-16 05:59 PM


Auntie Margie girl my favourite aunt who weaves rainbows and colours dreams. Thank you, if I could swirl this I would, but even without a swirl it’s a fabulous piece of writing. I wub it utterly too.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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10 posted 2002-04-16 07:21 PM


Marge,  Bill has got to be one very lucky
man....You write love of him so totally
FOR HIM!....Twogether Foreverly

Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2002-04-16 08:14 PM


BettyLou~
My poetic pleasure dear lady~
Thank you always for the read and replies~

MarshaLove~
LOL @ our Krissy ... she's been slapped up side the head with MargieGirl's magic palette of colors~

Krissy~
You sweet artiste` you~
You are such a delight ...
I can't wait until September to see you and your Mum~
OH .... hurry September~

Magnus~
I know we both realize how very fortunate we are to have reunited after so many years ... the commitment is foreverly~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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