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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-04-16 06:31 AM

The morning mist has risen me
in the heat of you.
Your hands awaken me.
Their lightness of touch brushing me
ever so gently, that my mind
has stepped back in time
remembering how you use to suspend me
in your stream of words,
your whispered kisses,
your body nudging against mine,
until I would succumb to the rhythm
of your breathing.

Each shadow on the wall
would embrace our movements
casting a mirrored image,
becoming voyeurs to ourselves.

I live confined, my feelings caged,
bounded by the afterthoughts of you
that cuff me in the night.
Do my visions distort the memory
or does my memory distort the visions of you,
pressing your want against my desire
and these scribblings that cover the truth,
the only way to have relief.

I reinforce myself, assuage my pain,
satisfy myself this way, all too often,
with the hush of emptiness
arousing the passions in me.
I am easily fired up, one glance,
one touch against my cheek,
one soft kiss turned hardened upon my lips,
yes, that will do it, will provoke
the hidden in me,
the shyness to explode,
a near chemical reaction to you,
if and when.

So today, again,I live in the myst of you,
waiting to burst forth in the Springtime of my life.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2002-04-16 09:48 AM

Wynter~

'bounded by the afterthoughts of you
that cuff me in the night.'

Oh ... what a longing thought~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

2 posted 2002-04-16 09:56 AM

This makes me want to go back to bed and start the day all over again ~ excellent fv, the passion in your words abounds.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2002-04-16 11:46 AM

waiting to burst forth in the Springtime of my life
====================
~*~
'tis springtime for you
blossom forth in your beauty
exploding in life

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-04-16 11:52 AM

Maureen,
You just get better and better. And this is a beautiful write.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2002-04-16 12:33 PM

Thank you Marge...I just popped in again after giving that cat of mine a bath and I am not sure who won the battle this time.*s

I have more hair on me I think then she has on her.. *s I liked that line too..although I may have been thinking handcuffs *wink

M

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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2002-04-16 12:35 PM

Opeth, thankyou for your visit and kind words *s

Interloper...I am working on it...just don't want the Spring to jump into Summer too fast, I am not ready for it. *s

Sy, I worked on this one especially for you..I love when you give me such encouragement to do better.
hugss
M

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Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

7 posted 2002-04-16 03:43 PM

Beautiful.....
~~ Connie ~~

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