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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-04-16 02:50 AM



I Think I'm A Basket Case

~*Grandma Marge*~

They never said it'd be this way
Hippity-Hop on Easter day !
They never told me it'd be like this
I was waiting for a Hershey's Kiss

Then in hopped something very funny
and they called it the Easter Bunny~

Oh, Mommy ! ... Daddy !
Come quick as you can
I've chocolate on my lips
and a funny-bunny within~

*Little Miss Delaney Makay Tindal's first Easter~
March 31, 2002


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
D.Lester Young
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1 posted 2002-04-16 02:54 AM


This a very cute piece with a precious thought. A good combination of words and a picture.
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2 posted 2002-04-16 02:55 AM


Marge,
You're the funny-bunny. Or I should say giddy-gramma! Fun little write.

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2002-04-16 05:45 AM


Marge..your little darling gets cuter all the time *s
hugss
M

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4 posted 2002-04-16 05:51 AM


Very nice Marge...James
Krissy
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5 posted 2002-04-16 09:56 AM


Auntie Margie girl oh my this is utterly utterly blame mum divine I love it, and I love Delaney she is the sweetest little darling. You do know this is exceptional writing the inspire simply pours from your poem. The rhythm and the rhyme in this are simply stunning. Oh yes I like this I really do.

Excellent writing, I’m loving the sight of such awesome poetry. YOU are wonderful


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Opeth
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6 posted 2002-04-16 09:58 AM


A picture is worth a thousand words they say, what a lovely pic and the words that went with it made it seem to me to be a Easter card from Hallmarks.
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7 posted 2002-04-16 10:02 AM


Awwww, precious and few those moments you view.  Loved this and you!
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2002-04-16 10:03 AM


DLYoung~
Thank you ... she's my heart's delight~

LarryC~
Pleading 'Grandma-Guilt' to both charges~

Wynter~
*sigh* ... yes, she does~

JamesMichael~
Thank you, sweetie~

Krissy~
She just squeezes my heart~

Opeth~
THANK YOU !
I believe she will write many more Hallmark's on my heart~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2002-04-16 10:04 AM


MissMartieSis~
I LOVE sharing her with YOU~
*HUGS*
~*Me*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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10 posted 2002-04-16 12:45 PM


What a little love!!!! *S* She looks like a magnet for kisses... and I'm not talking Hershey's! *S* This is beautiful, Marge... what a wonderful way to commemorate Delaney's first Easter. *S*
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11 posted 2002-04-16 01:56 PM


Awwww look at her....so sweet...thanks for sharing her Easter with us....



Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

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12 posted 2002-04-16 05:56 PM


Delaney just steals my heart!  Scrumptious
looking little beauty!  

Betty Lou Hebert

Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2002-04-16 08:59 PM


SuthernAuntie~
You KNOW she'd like your kisses VERY much~
Wish you could deliver them first-lipped~

GreenEyes~
Aww ... thanks ... she's a sweetie alright~

BettyLou~
And the neatest thing is she's even SWEETER than she looks !
She's the happiest little 'wake-up' baby ... all smiles and curiosity~
We are so blessed~

*Thank you all for putting up with my poetic love-flood for this granddaughter~
I promise there will be more~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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