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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Fragile in spite of maturity- Creeping in amethyst-crimsons abroad, Fears of naïveté intervene- As a stocking falls to the floor… Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Remarkable my sister! The image is sharp visually and the emotion is just as vivid! Ya made my heart flutter, remembering... Glad to see you home again, lovie.  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ So good to see you back in fine poetic style~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I like this, fragility presented in a strong poem. Well done. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
I believe that I understand what this means, if I am correct, then I enjoy this even moreso than if I interpreted it incorrectly. Fragile in spite of maturity...cool line, especially when combined with fear of naivete. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
oh yes. . . I like this image. . . it froze me for a second as I saw it. . . excellent. . . (you know, you really need to come around more often, well, at least when you can). . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Oh Tanya, this is so very powerful, sweet friend, it is a delight to read your wonderful words again! (smiles) We have all missed you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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