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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Blue By: Noah Eaton 4/15/02 I play Tahiti drums and Macchu Picchu flutes Attempting to contact the rainmaker I look down at this dust bowl beneath my feet And watch all my dreams wither away Because I'm missing you And I used to speak so easy I can't find a warm place to dream It feels lime walking with the ghosts I close my eyes and meditate All this yearning permeates My eyes sting bloodshot Because I'm missing you And I never claim to understand How so many things are under rug swept Now I feel so upset Missing you When we're blue My heart is afflicted with hemorrhage I'm trapped behind winters portcullis I'm just every springs hosteler Living in my own private cellar I just want to hold you And kiss away all these tears That seem to evaporate only to fall again And end this drought End this drought You're all my heart desires, I love you too much And I'm missing you... Everything seems so blurry, it's like a moire effect I just want to find my spring modus vivendi More sweet than just a typical bowl of Honey Nut Cheerios A Sunday game of Yahtzee Is it too little too late? Will I ever get to hold love close? Now I feel so upset Missing you When we're blue My heart is afflicted with hemorrhage I'm trapped behind winters portcullis There's this burning deep inside There is no place for my dreams to hide I just want to hold you And kiss away all these tears That seem to evaporate only to fall again And end this drought End this drought You're all my heart desires, I love you too much And I'm missing you... You say you can't grow You say you feel cold Believe e I know Cause I'm missing you... You say you can't grow You say you feel cold Believe e I know Cause I'm missing you... Everything feels so blue... Everything feels so blue... [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-15-2002 11:08 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Attempting to contact the rainmaker I look down at this dust bowl beneath my feet And watch all my dreams wither away" Very good, Noah! Great imagery. And of course, I love the Machu Pichu flute music too. But I'm sorry you are feeling blue.  Feel better? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
There is so much sadness in your beautiful poetry sweet Noah! I do hope you perk up soon sweetie...we love you so much! AND spring is here! Lovely poem. Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Blue? Not you! Hope that you are past this spell soon! Great write! Shenachie |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
SweetNoah~ A tender write sweet friend...even through sadness you express beautiful thoughts. *hugs* ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Noah, I'm with Kacy...great imagery! Well done.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 oh Noah, I feel such pain here...I'm glad you have shared. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"a moire effect I just want to find my spring modus vivendi" I love this, sweet noah. I would adore seeing an entire theme around it. Happy Hugs to see you again! |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
This has several very powerful verses. I hope you find the music to find the refreshness of a special love raining your way. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
When we are missing someone so much it is the deepest shade of blue and yet it pales in the light of love. Nice transalation of emotions Noah~ |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Noah, you write very beautifully. Remember that sunshine usually comes through skies of blue. And after the rain skies are always clearer and more beautiful. ((Noah)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
pretty writing there fellow |
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craigrk Member
since 2001-12-23
Posts 123 |
blue gets better. enjoyed the read |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Missing someone is Gods way of reminding us how much we care for them...take care...James |
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