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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2002-04-15 09:00 PM



Our voices breathe our passioned pleas why can we not just be you and me?
Forever I want to be wrapped in your arms and sweetly seduced by all your charms
I cannot stand being away from you any longer but for your love, I will suffer
I want to be with you night and day, time is the only thing that stands in our way
I save your messages on my phone so I can hear your voice when I feel alone
Tell me when these feelings will stop because
i know you feel the same
Sometimes I feel like i'm in a dream then i wake up and you cease to be
Tears of sorrow I cry at night but I know I will hear your voice in the morning light
I know I tell you this everyday but
I will tell you till the day I die.....Lana, I love you..........

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1 posted 2002-04-15 09:56 PM


"Our voices breathe our passioned pleas why can we not just be you and me?"
Why not, indeed. I enjoyed the read.

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2 posted 2002-04-15 10:28 PM


Laura,
I have 8 saved messages on my phone...just for the same reason! Nice write.

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Real love from an honest voice.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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4 posted 2002-04-16 02:55 PM


Yes I have saved messages also...to hear her sweet voice and personality....James
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5 posted 2002-04-16 03:05 PM


Thank you all for your replies to my poem.  I have definitely found the one that I want to spend the rest of my life with.

Voice mail is great isn't???  lol

Take Care,
~Laura~

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6 posted 2002-04-16 03:13 PM




(smiles) YAY!!! Oh my gosh, I'm so happy I found this, I almost commented last night but I had to go to bed! (kiss on cheek) I am so happy for you and I wish you and Lana the greatest happiness forever together, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Laura, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


ParisGrl
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7 posted 2002-04-16 03:20 PM


Noah,

Thank you so much for your reply.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  

~Laura~

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8 posted 2002-04-16 03:38 PM


Laura,

yes, it is. . .

this is very good from you. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

ParisGrl
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9 posted 2002-04-16 04:48 PM


john,

hey!  how are you????  thank you for your reply.  

~Laura~

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