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Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2002-04-15 06:16 PM

Behind Your Eyes

I am that vision
behind your eyes
a thread of thought
lined in realize

I am that smell
of baking bread
a taste that you
would hold, instead

and like the bread
soft and tender
I fill your needs
a craving surrendered

I am that vision
behind your eyes
filling you always
with loving surprise

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-04-15 06:59 PM

(smiles) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) May you always see true love smile in the corner of your eye to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-04-15 07:16 PM

Deca, this is lovely, and just sultry enough for this rather warm spring day.
~hugs~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2002-04-15 08:56 PM

now that's what I would like to be to someone *s

M

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2002-04-15 10:05 PM

I would call you Wonder Bread!!!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2002-04-15 10:14 PM

This is really good! Thnaks for sharing your prize baking secrets.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2002-04-15 10:22 PM

Excellent! ThisDiamond

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

7 posted 2002-04-15 10:24 PM

definitely a wonder bread!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2002-04-16 01:57 AM

very nice one! i liked it much!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2002-04-16 03:26 AM

DecaFlame~

'I am that vision
behind your eyes
filling you always
with loving surprise'

Now I like this thought~
Muchly enjoyed~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2002-04-16 05:43 AM

some lovely thoughts
I like behind the eyes
my favorite place to play

enjoyed this deca

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

11 posted 2002-04-16 09:13 AM

nicely done Deca... Enjoyed

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

12 posted 2002-04-16 09:19 AM

Decca hi there this is perfectly lovely writing, smooth as silk and so soft against the mind. I like this I really do. You keep writing thoughts of inspire and I shall keep reading between the eyes and sighs.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

13 posted 2002-04-16 10:00 AM

I enjoyed the style and imagery of this poem. I especially enjoyed this line

"a thread of thought
lined in realize"

enjoyed!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

14 posted 2002-04-16 10:00 AM

Deca

And so the flour becomes flower. Beautiful!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

15 posted 2002-04-16 10:51 AM

I will close my eyes
the better to hold you there
on the tip of tongue

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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