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Mark Coburn
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0 posted 2002-04-15 01:52 PM



I cannot wait for
when you really
should be living

denizens of darker
environs chased
the albino squirrel

with her backpack
she strode
majestically alone

I knew the reality
listening to the past
deep hunger was
aquired amidst
the wanderlust

running with the dogs
scented trail of
the hunted
beat of horses hooves
on leaf strewn
muddy ground

Bukowsi could write
free from a job
all day long at 49
me a job slave
but so close
to freedom

scent of spring
still waiting for
the smell in the air
somber resolutions
while watching the
sunrise everyday.........Mark Coburn

© Copyright 2002 Mark Coburn - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-04-15 02:17 PM


just a smile..for your thoughts
~s~
M

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2 posted 2002-04-15 03:10 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is a very powerful perspective, sweet friend, I too can't wait for all the cherry blossoms to bud and sparrows flood all the trees in my neighborhood with spring laughter! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2002-04-15 03:13 PM


So close to being free. I know that feeling. This is good, Mark.
Sandra

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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2002-04-15 03:14 PM



How well so many of us could relate to this piece, Mark...thank you so much for showing us what is really important!

Mark Coburn
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5 posted 2002-04-16 07:49 AM


thank you my friends for taking the time to share some feeling ...mark
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