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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-04-15 10:50 AM


It would seem to be that this thing called life
has dealt me one to many unlucky hands
but I REFUSE to just give up
or be kept under it's command.

Throughout life I have been tested
some were passed, others were not.
There have been memories made
some to be kept, others to be forgot.

Now once again I find myself
with another so called "situation"
and once again I'll do the best I can
cuz I've got a BAD CASE OF DETERMINATION!

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)


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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2002-04-15 11:45 AM


Gentle Spirit
Enjoyed the read.

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2002-04-15 12:53 PM


it's all you can do...you're not alone in it, by any means. I know exactly what you feel!
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-04-15 01:38 PM


Like this...James
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-04-15 04:00 PM


Good for you girl!
Use that determination to work through
whatever the situation is.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-04-15 04:10 PM




YAY!!! Such hope and perserveranc efill your words, sweet friend, may you surmont all that tomorrow brings and find all the joy your heart desires! (kiss on ceek)This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus
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6 posted 2002-04-15 04:20 PM


hang in there....I think you are determined
to make things work....Good!

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