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April Rain.....
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April Rain..... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Soft touch April rain Sweet remember Once again Lost beyond Window pane Feeling only Love’s ingrain Tears refuse To restrain Wistful smile Lips maintain Heart beating You remain….. ~SEA~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It is what we retain that remains~ Loved your gentle rain and the way your words flow SEA~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
It's raining here, too...I still don't get what you see in it. lol Though, I appreciate the poem exactly! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, Sweet refrain, Once again. Well done...lc |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you Bluesy  Cowboy, one day you will look at the rain, and just know... Larry,  thank you |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is lovely Susan. Such soft tender memories in these few words. Such big impact. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Love's ingrain Tears refuse To restrain Wistful smile Lips maintain Heart beating You remain ============================ love the soft rhythm of this rhyme .... "Love's ingrain" ... love that line too... beautiful Sea-girlie how about how good it feels to finally forgive you |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may true love forever offer you spring and light your heart with songbirds trills and rainbows! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, A soft well done. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sea.. flows down the page.. like a gentle spring rain. Love it! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe darling girl this is simply outstanding writing. Again flawless and perfectly presented. What can I say but this is exceptional. Wonderful flow and rhythm as you seem to always do. The soft gentle embers of an almost forgotten remember. The softness of the rain’s tears, oh you write so well girlie you really do, wonderful writing utterly wonderful   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sue, I love the way this haunts. Well done. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
The tears of remain Always flow with April Rain. From sky of gray At the dawn of day, To sky of unbright At the dawn of night. But, April Tears fade away When come the winds of May. Tears fade, but love always remains. Thank you What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. [This message has been edited by Moonlight Romeo (04-16-2002 01:58 PM).] |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
It falls softly on the ear and on the heart. Beautiful!! Patience is the ability to idle your motor, when you feel like stripping your gears. Author Unknown |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
April rain, Summer showers. . . well, perhaps one isn't the other. . . there can be such a thing as too much rain. . . yes, you've shown that here. . . well done. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
for you it is ANY rain |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely Sea...James |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Like a gentle rain shower....  ~sky I'm in charge, and I say question authority! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautifully written Sue...love how this flows .. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
'love's ingrain" I also adore that line! Most beautiful thoughts that I can certainly 'feel' and relate to P.S. - I love this style from you, it works well. Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound...or a smiling mouth" ~Kahlil Gibran~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (04-16-2002 11:35 PM).] |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
This is nicely done with your gentle touch of perfection. |
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