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Zinsser
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0 posted 2002-04-14 09:20 PM


In Hopes Of


Sandals worn
From the dry
Desert sand
They trudge

Lips parched
Hair clings
With sweat
As thejourney
Continues

Continues
Keep moving
In hopes of
An
Oasis


Connie McDonald
Copyright@2002
April 14. 2002
3AM

© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-14 09:52 PM


Excellent!
Connie, you write very well...
for it being in the middle of the night.
I can't, and wish I could.
~Hugs~

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2 posted 2002-04-14 09:56 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo wonderfully said, sweet friend, I know with all my heart you will find that oasis and there you will find all your dreams come true! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, I am delighted to read your work again, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-04-14 10:28 PM


Zinsser~
I greatly enjoyed the way you developed this~

'Keep moving
In hopes of
An
Oasis'


WONDERFUL ! !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Zinsser
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4 posted 2002-04-15 11:39 AM


Thank You .... All
My son and I were listening to his new CD driving down the road and this came to mind... I forgot all about it until the middle of the night ...
Thanks Again
~~ Connie ~~

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