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Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2002-04-14 09:15 PM

Feel What I See

Images upturned of fallen rainbows
Raging waters flooding my brows
Passionate winds blowing upwards
Towards an heaven of higher standards

Broken hearts of lovers weeping
Faded wings of butterflies dying
Children lost in a paradise of disguise
Frowning in innocent waves of shattered dreams

Come by my soul, hear the sorrow
Look into my eyes feel what I see
Hold my trembling life from darkness' shadow
Tell me that flowers will bloom tomorrow

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

1 posted 2002-04-14 09:32 PM

Daniel...Such a MAGNIFICENT POEM!!! The words like a breath of fresh air.

***Ivy Rose

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2002-04-14 09:32 PM

see what my heart feels
in this reach of friendship
the gentle hold of your hand
see beyond the sorrow
to images grand
walk with me to healing gardens
smell the flowers in bloom
look towards love
and clear away the gloom

hope you are ok.....

kat
Member

since 2000-05-20

Posts 387

3 posted 2002-04-14 10:15 PM

This is so moving. Daniel, the flowers will bloom tomorrow. I'm still waiting for mine to do the same but I know they will one day and yours will too. Sometimes it just takes longer then what we'd like. "sigh"

kat

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-04-14 10:22 PM

Daniel, the flowers indeed will bloom again tomorrow....
such sorrow in this write.
Hope you are well....
~Warm Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2002-04-14 10:23 PM

JD~
So very good to see you~

'Tell me that flowers will bloom tomorrow'

They will my friend ... they will~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-04-14 10:25 PM

(big hugggssssss) This is so very sad but powerful, sweet friend, I know with all my heart those flowers will bloom tomorrow and true joy and dreams are bound to come true for you! (smiles) Always believe in your heart and you can achieve anything, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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