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kat
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0 posted 2002-04-14 02:17 PM


Awake Outside A Dream

A thousand yearning dreams await
For I not once have seen true light
In eyes so sorrowed by so many
To fight a constant endless plight

The sound of wisdom faintly sings
A long forgotten melody
Trying so hard to pierce a soul
A desperate soul in agony

A thousand yearning dreams await
Winds corrupt a peaceful sight
Prospect not a constant torment
Embrace the dream that might

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skyshine
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1 posted 2002-04-14 02:19 PM


I enjoyed this a lot....nicely expressed.

~sky

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kat
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2 posted 2002-04-14 04:50 PM


Thanks sky!  I'm glad you enjoyed it!

kat

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-04-14 05:01 PM


May you embrace true light..soon...James
kat
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4 posted 2002-04-14 06:59 PM


You're sweet James, Thanks!

kat

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5 posted 2002-04-14 07:26 PM


dreams can be so beautiful...i hope all yours come true
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