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ShadowRider
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0 posted 2002-04-14 12:23 PM


  

                   "A Hymn to Glory of You"

          I have devoured this enchanted eve
                   with the zeal of an over-seasoned endive
              windows cast wide to the chaste wind

             like putty in your end of the day arms
                  silent kisses witnessed gently like natal days
             men, who have not tread these angel touches
                  shall never traverse these soft rivers
            as lovers who have ne'er pushed aside
            Autumn chilly breezes in a swing seat
            missing those marbled lips mysteries

            oh, but a childish favor I ask without speaking
                 as you wave goodbye each morn
            blowing miss-you-already kisses upon sweet dew
                 and I swear I see stars in your eyes
            like a glittering mirror in sunlight

            tonight, when I return
                 and we dream of Love and Faith and Trust
                       I promise you,
                            you shall never sleep alone
                                   ever again


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1 posted 2002-04-14 12:29 PM


"   tonight, when I return
                 and we dream of Love and Faith and Trust
                       I promise you,
                            you shall never sleep alone
                                   ever again"




(smiles) You are a true romantic, sweet friend, I just know you will always make the Juliet of your heart so very happy as you praise her always of the true beauty she is and make her feel so very special! (big hugggsssss) May you always rest close to your love, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jeff, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-04-14 01:50 PM


tonight, when I return
                 and we dream of Love and Faith and Trust
                       I promise you,
                            you shall never sleep alone
                                   ever again
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Oh Wow Jeff!!
Sorry I know that Noah chose this stanza
as his favourite also...but,
oh my...this is so exquisite and beautiful...
love it and I'm keeping it.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Victoria
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3 posted 2002-04-14 06:52 PM


i love the same stanza as nancy ..this was so lovely jeff..loved the whole poem...from beginning to end...you romantic you ..ha..hugss..

                 ~Victoria

Dulcinea
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4 posted 2002-04-14 09:34 PM


Ummmmmmmmmmm...so did I Vic...so did I! ~~soft murmuring heart-sighs~~

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