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redemptress (unserene)
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redemptress (unserene) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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beneath my skin a tempest I became again... boiling pressure of my blood-- redemptress-- loving the unloved... unhallowed haunting of my mind words like breadcrumbs left behind roiling beneath my skin I dare to write them all-- amend the quibbles of insomnia the stuff that dreams are not made of... where is the catalyst of change? why must I make myself estranged? Why do I need a starting block stagnation of myself in lock? I'm writing tears. Fondly cradling my fears. like you do. No one knows me-- bruise of truth-- yellowed greens of rising swell contusion's proof of inner hell. [This message has been edited by serenity (04-14-2002 08:35 AM).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
She's back in full force for sure...  Nice piece of work, serene one...  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Truer words were never spoken, Nan...this has a lot of vrooom, vrooom in it! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Had to pop in to say thanks to the nanners and sunny one---it is SO good to be home! Love to you both! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
What a thoroughly unserene poem. I like it, and missed you. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Great poem, missed you.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yuppers...sure is unserene! And..I love it!! Sooo glad you're back! ~more hugs~ |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Nan, welcome home. I missed you, too. And what a beautiful way to remind all of us of your inner beauty trading love for sadness. ((Nan)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
had to pop in to giggle... heh heh heh... I wanna hug NAN too! (((((((nan))))))) This was FUN.... DAMN...was it good for you guys too?  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This is just me. I'm writing tears. Fondly cradling my fears. No one knows me like you do. No one knows me-- bruise of truth-- yellowed greens of rising swell contusion's proof of inner hell. ============================== dont ever stop writing baby.... and never forget...this machine dont make us poets. You were born with that gift. its so good to see your name here. feels like sunshine on me cheek.  how about how good it feels to finally forgive you |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! Oh Karen, we're all so happy you're back, sweet friend, it is a delight to read your wonderful words again! (smiles) May you always be the redemptress and seek all your dreams and what makes you happy! (big hugggssssss) This is superb, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Only you could make me like a poem with the word "contusion" in it. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hey, it was great for me. . .  but, then again, it's always been good. . . lol you never cease to amaze me. . . no wonder I like your work so much. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
No one knows me like you do. No one knows me-- bruise of truth-- yellowed greens of rising swell contusion's proof of inner hell. Can I get an Amen? [This message has been edited by Duncan (05-01-2002 06:22 PM).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Can you do me a favour...can you try this one non-centred? Just for me, pleeeeeeeease..? I really want to see what it would look like...why? Something about the rhythm... anywho, I like it Karen...  K |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Kamla? I will do this, if you explain to me the crime of rhyme and rhythm. |
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