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Victoria
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0 posted 2002-04-14 02:42 AM



Spanish moss

flows over the night

like a wingspan

upon the moon

gliding through

branches of moonlight

youthful seeds of passion

lost upon a breeze

entangled within the bark

and limbs of ole oak trees

as whispers in the night

rustle of forgotten love

and aged fingers of oak

caresses like a velvet glove

and soft mystical hair

flows with starlight from above


"If music be the food of love, play on."  (William Shakespeare)



© Copyright 2002 Victoria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-14 06:03 AM


Have you been kissing under the oak tree again...James
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2 posted 2002-04-14 08:18 AM


And you always write of love so vividly, and longingly
Sandra

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3 posted 2002-04-14 11:53 AM


I wish James ha..thanks sweetie

thank you sandra..nice of you to say..hugs

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4 posted 2002-04-14 12:04 PM




(smiles) You always paint the most gorgeous visions of love, sweet friend, this is filled with longing but also such enchantment of dreams! (kiss on cheek) May true love stroke this silk hair and may this love hold true happiness forever, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-04-14 12:44 PM


VicSter:

    ~ cross-stitches ~

oh, but the glitter of star-smiles
dotting fairest flower hair wisps
reflect a moon's shy light
cross-stitched by the linking
of two chosen hands

wonderful wonderful wonderful!
the tendrils of Spainish moss
were a perfect compliment to the title

Peace and hugs
and everything in-between
jeff  

[This message has been edited by ShadowRider (04-14-2002 12:48 PM).]

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6 posted 2002-04-14 01:52 PM


WOW...this is beautiful Victoria!
Love it...it's magical.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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7 posted 2002-04-14 06:36 PM


Just lovely Victoria! Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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8 posted 2002-04-14 06:54 PM


noah jeff nancy and chris...happy to see you all stop by today..hugs to all

               ~Victoria

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9 posted 2002-04-14 07:06 PM


The picturesque vision that you have given
the reader is always spectacular....This
poem is no exception!.

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10 posted 2002-04-14 07:23 PM


gorgeous writing as always! How do u write so beautifully?! I need to take notes
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11 posted 2002-04-14 09:50 PM


barry..you are just too kind to me..hugss thank you for peeking in today

Joanna..Thank you hon..and you are so nice too hugss...

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