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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2002-04-13 07:32 PM



The feminine, a song that writes itself
Sing the songs of girlish dreams, emotional wealth
A soft hum sweetly at the edge of rippling
Waterfalls and tickled fancy sweetly nibbling

The feminine, too deep to keep the pouting lipped
Sing the songs of honeysuckle lightly sipped
A fragrant blossom shy to bloom in darkness
Creatively the colors painted on in sharpness

The feminine, vibrant choices lead the knight
Sing the songs of painted nails, as girls delight
A curtsy done in style and satin bodice
Quite clearly to become his fairy tale goddess

Copyright Kkh 4/13/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2002-04-13 07:40 PM


WOW!!  How much do I love this?!
Wonderful...great flow and imagery.
Enjoyed ever so much!
~hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-04-13 07:50 PM


Very nice...James
Duncan
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3 posted 2002-04-13 07:54 PM


Reads like a fairytale!
Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-04-13 09:39 PM




YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is a wonderful fairy-tale of delight, sweet friend, I love it, your wonderful words never cease to amaze me! (kiss on cheek) May love always make your dreams come true, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-04-13 09:43 PM


very cuticle, diamond lady


(payback for duck tape )

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6 posted 2002-04-14 08:29 AM



There is always that hope in all of the preparation...I like this, Kathleen...good job!

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7 posted 2002-04-14 08:35 AM


Oh,I relate, and I love this.
Sandra

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8 posted 2002-04-14 08:48 AM


A very beautiful poem. It reads like the  signature of a poetess I know.

((ThisDiamond))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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9 posted 2002-04-14 09:35 AM


Lovely.
Zinsser
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10 posted 2002-04-16 03:58 PM


Oh I do like this piece...  : )
Very nice
  ~~ Connie ~~

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