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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-04-13 06:14 PM


It's raining in my heart
When you are away from my side
I walk this beach alone
My happiness taken with the tide

But my smile always returns
When we are together as one
As you wrap your arms around me
And tenderly kiss me beneath the sun

Our hands interlace together
As we stroll along the sand
You stop to tell me you love me
Then gently kiss the back of my hand

You look deeply into my eyes
And know exactly how I feel
You ignite my inner passion
As your lips on mine now seal

The warm wind blows around us
As the sun starts sinking low
My heart growing ever fonder
As love continues to bloom and grow

Our love rides on waves of devotion
And floats on waters clear and blue
We'll sail towards the sunset
As I deliver my love to you

Suetang

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-04-13 06:25 PM


Beautiful...absolutely perfect Sue!
Enjoyed so very much.
Hugs.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-04-13 06:41 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your love always bring you true happiness and share you all your heart desires! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2002-04-13 07:35 PM


The sun and the surf in the air of this beautiful tune. Nice melody. ThisDiamond
Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056
Kansas USA
4 posted 2002-04-13 11:08 PM


Wow!  The beach is the most romantic setting!
Lovely write!

Shenachie

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