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0 posted 2002-04-13 04:57 PM




Burst of Storm

look at us! a connection
burst, reconnecting
now, in this life
sparking delight
fingertips sparkling
a mystery of light

touch me now!
for no caress will do
no! we meet with
cymballic nature
in symbolic fervor
with symbols that tremble

thunder rumbles
flashing crashes
and in the aftermath
in the aftermath
God will grant us
breath…

breathe for me
please, exhale
let me know you
live,
and let me know
you forgive
the fact that we
have waited so long
to reconnect….

in circumspect

should we wait
or crash again
bring the air up tight
and let it spin
tornado a moment
or hurricane a sigh
or let it go
by and bye

comfort comes
in the aftermath
it lends its way
down long green path

ah, but see the sight
white of light
within dark of bright
clouds make night
within the day
electric confluence
holds the sway
know that I am
within your charm
but I am grounded
within your arms

afterwhich
the ozone lays
new and bright
and comes in haze
of nebulous feel
a miraculous real

and look at us
we are
an appeal...


~*~


Repost
2/2001
revised
4/2002

© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-13 05:15 PM


should we wait
or crash again
bring the air up tight
and let it spin
tornado a moment
or hurricane a sigh
or let it go
by and bye

I really liked this.  Could feel the current in the air!

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2 posted 2002-04-13 05:37 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, this is a storm of emotions that shines from your golden quill! (sigh) I love lightning and the forces of nature it always sparks off, sweet friend, this scintillates with power, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-04-13 06:17 PM


thunder rumbles
flashing crashes
and in the aftermath
in the aftermath
God will grant us
breath…

breathe for me
please, exhale
let me know you
live,
and let me know
you forgive
the fact that we
have waited so long
to reconnect….

in circumspect
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
WOW!!  Hang on Toto!
Felt like I was in a whirlwind
for a moment there.....
and it was wonderful!
Karilea this has such a special
feel to it...lifting up and then
crashing down again to...breathe.
I love it!  Hugs.

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4 posted 2002-04-13 06:40 PM


Karilea~

I love a good storm, this is a stunning vision...very nice my friend...

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2002-04-13 06:44 PM


I really like this. We forget that a healthy connection isn't always gentle...sometimes it is passionate and even electric.
I saw lightning here! ThisDiamond

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