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Open Poetry #20

morning gold

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2002-04-13 09:39 AM

morning gold
glistens
piercing the very vision
I hold

it tears apart
the shadows of cumulus
that would block
the beauty of
this rising day

in the solitude
of darkness
robins sang
the day to life

and now
the gleaming
of the sunshine
cuts the grayness
like a knife

as if the jeweler’s foundry
has a vat
of immense size
in which to
melt and gather purely
all the worth
of day’s comprise

©April 13, 2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2002-04-13 11:15 AM

Good morning VAS! Pretty images in here.

~sky

I'm in charge, and I say question authority!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2002-04-13 12:25 PM

Lovely poem to wake up to this morning.
It stirs the senses and leaves a warm glow.

So pretty~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-04-13 02:16 PM

(smiles) Wow, I love the imagery in this dazzling piece, sweet friend, to me the sunshine is always the jewelry of the day too! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!