»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #20
»
Seduced
| Open Poetry #20 |
|
Seduced |
|
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States 
|
Seduced By Larry Chadwick It isn’t what you wear, Or even how you wink. You do it with your mind, It is the way you think. It’s not the shape of you, Or how you strut about. It’s how you communicate, Yes, even when you pout. It’s not the hair that flips, Or how you set those curls. It’s what’s inside your head, That always makes me swirl. It’s not the food you bake, Or how you keep our home. But what you do inside of me, Just like a little gnome. It’s not your touch, Or looks you give. But how you contemplate, The love that you will give. Though all that’s nice, Don’t let that go away. It’s the seduction of my mind, That really makes me stay. April 12, 2002 [This message has been edited by Larry C (04-13-2002 04:04 AM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Larry Chadwick - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It's nice to be noticed...James |
||
|
doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
it's all up there between the ears, Larry... you are sooooooo right!!!  (well, it's also in the middle of the chest and way down there, too... hehe... which btw is a poem i'm in the process of writing... coming soon!... it's a threesome! look for it at your neighborhood blue pages.. *grin) |
||
SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I prefer the combination of mind, body and soul nicely done Larry  |
||
|
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It is our mind that defines who we really are. You write so nice Larry~ Sweet stuff~ |
||
|
peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
If more people could learnt o love us for these things then there would be more love in the world.It's great that you see the true beauty in her.Great write. Peaches |
||
|
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yes, it is the mind that seduces and touches one another and the heart that harnesses the spark of fondness! (big hugggssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
||
|
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Cute. I like a man who appreciates everything about a woman. Sandra |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah gee, and all this time I thought it was my body! LOL....how very true Larry... brains come first. Love this. Hugs. |
||
|
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Larry The power of a woman's mind, eh? I suppose we keep all of you men guessing somtimes as to how we tick. I loved this! Take care.......Sue Suetang |
||
Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Larry~ All of the above...work...nice words here...  Lauren~ Step through the |
||
|
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
JM, Yup, indeed it is. Thanks. dor, How can I argue any of that? Hey...email me the link, please And thanks.  Susan, Well...okay I could be persuaded! LOL Thanks. Lori, I just know that the package ain't enough for me. If you can't seduce my mind...you can't have the rest! And thanks a bunch Lori.peaches, Thanks and you are so very right. |
||
|
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Noah, Ooh good line! And thanks. Sandra, Sounds good to me! Thanks a lot. Nancy Lee, Well now that you mention it...LOL And thanks. Sue, Well, most men anyway... Thanks.  Lauren~ Oh good...cause it sure works on me! Thanks. |
||
|
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"It's the seduction of the mind that really makes me stay" ------------------ I couldn't agree more! Well said! Now, you've inspired me to write Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
||
|
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Melissa, Holy cow...I can hardly wait. I love your writing, especially your love poems! Thanks. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Very sweetly put, Larry. The inner qualities of a person shine through, be they man or woman. That is what is loved, for me. Enjoyed your poem! |
||
|
Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
It's so nice to know that there are some good men out there who appreciates the finer points in a woman Love it!!Kristen [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (04-17-2002 03:45 PM).] |
||
|
Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Awesome write, Larry! Am glad you have the eyes to see within a person instead of what they hold on the outside. You have a good heart! Great write Sauni @~~~>~~ |
||
|
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Martie, So true... The best connection of all! Kristen, I'd say it is the finest point. But that's just me. Thanks. Saunni, Well...thanks mam! I do appreciate that. |
||
|
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Larry - like it my friend, like it a lot. So much truth in this write... BC |
||
|
J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Brains before beauty...I like it. "The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince |
||
|
Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Great thoughts...great poem, Larry... Lots of truths here... Though all that’s nice, Don’t let that go away. It’s the seduction of my mind, That really makes me stay. lots of hugs~ copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
||
|
rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Mind stimulation.. The stuff that dreams are made of..I believe it is definitely a matter of taste...So glad you appreciate the worth of a beautiful brain. Sincerely, Regina [This message has been edited by rwood (04-18-2002 09:31 PM).] |
||
|
Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Larry...The mind can be a powerful aphrodisiac. That kind of seduction can be more intriguing. This poem is power-packed with seductive images. ***Ivy Rose |
||
|
skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I agree, the mind is what keeps me attracted to some people. Very nicely done, Larry!  ~sky I'm in charge, and I say question authority! |
||
|
Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This flows so nicely. Very lovely poem. |
||
|
ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
liked the run through of the different ways our hearts can be touched, delightful! |
||
|
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bill, Wow...thanks. I really appreciate that. JK, And the first ehances the second or diminishes as the case may be. Thanks.Madame C, I get lots of everything from you. And I like that. Thanks. Mr. CReg, And speaking of taste... Thanks.Ivy Rose, You got this concept down perfect. I love it! Thanks. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
||
|
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
skyshine, Fun how that works, isn't it? Thanks. Eloise, Hey...you've been here a while. Nice to meet you. Thank you so much. ecrivan, I'm glad you got that. Thanks. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
