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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
 The blanket of winter bitter cold crept quietly into a home where once two shared their everything a not too distant time ago... No more the warmth of summer touch the delicate scent of bloom in spring the golden memories of autumn days no longer sway among the trees... Lips of desire fingertips of fire soft voices no longer heard when you stumble around walls built by two in commun...ication...break...down *~coco*~ Reference to: /pip/Forum7/HTML/000430.html |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Coco!  always love reading your poetry  this is deeply touching, what a fantastic job on the challenge you did! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
MUAHHHHH on cheeks2uSweetieSea... Thank you4taking a peak and your kind comments DearPoetFriend... HugsNsmiles2u *~coco~* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I lived this and I'm determined not to repeat this mistake...James |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
BigHugs2uPoetFriend James and I thank you4stopping by and commenting... *~coco~* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It is sad when the walls come tumbling down and we're left to question the foundation and if we can possibly rebuild upon it. Good write hot toddy~ I enjoy your poetry so much CocoBaci~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Excellent done, like it a lot!!! Charisma |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) WOW!!! Oh my gosh, this is a wonderful response to the challenge, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Coco, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
((BLUES)) you're a sweetie my Friend and my heart hugz ya... Charisma, as always my dearPoetFriend, I thank you4stopping by and I send ya big hugz... Mistletoe, thank you4your comments dearAngelPoetFriend and muahhh on cheekz2u*~coco~* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
as always my wonderful PoetFriend, you bring your wonderful style to this one. . .and make it your own. . . excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
You described it well CoCo..nicely done indeed...hugss...enjoyed ~Victoria |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sven, you are way2sweet my Friend and I thank you truly from the bottom of my heart4your kind words2me ya know mean alot... Victoria, you're a jewel sweetie and I thank you4letting me know you stopped thru here (((hugs2uAlways))) *~coco~* |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And you never notice when it starts... but perhaps it starts because you're not noticing. *S* I like this very much, Coco... excellent work! *S* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very well written, and full of truth. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi2u Suthern & Midnitesun and many thanx4your sweet comments you've left me here... HugsNsmiles 2u both... *~coco~* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
No more the warmth of summer touch the delicate scent of bloom in spring the golden memories of autumn days no longer sway among the trees... ============================ How did I miss this melancholy beauty??? Ack!! these Taxes have had me so distracted...all work and no poetry will never work for me Coco this is a bittersweet gem from your pen. SO good to get to read you for a change  heart-hugs jm how about how good it feels to finally forgive you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CoCoBaci~ This is stunningly beautiful in it's form~ A pleasurable read always dear lady~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
CoCo Oh my I knew you were good, but I never knew you were this good. Do you know how good this really is? I mean the construction the flow the internal rhythm this is utterly stunning. This is utterly wonderful it is perfect I love it darling heart I love it I’m not often presented with such delight, I’ve seen wonder and been astounded by it before, this however is utterly utterly fantastic. You’ve surpassed yourself here. You’re always a good writer, in this you’re a great writer Do I love this? What do you think? …………. YES I love it Absolutely first class writing  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Janet, my heart hugz you back dearsweetPoetFriend and much thanx goes out2u4your kind reply2me Marge, bearhugz2you dearPoetFriend and my thanx goes out2u as well 4letting me know you peaked at this page Marsha, you're a treasure PoetFriend with such a sweet repy2me here, but it is I who truly thanx you 4the inspiration came from your challenge post... Muaah on cheekz2you3sweetPoetFriends... *~coco~* |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Another wonderful write from your pen! We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You've been peeking, haven't you? SIGH...sigh... I saw myself in everyline. (and I closed my eyes for the parts where HE was there! )Thanks coco! I smiled at myself just now! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I understood this a little too much for my tastes today. I'm going back to my corner now. enjoyed. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Thank you EagleOne for perusing thru this page it's always a treat2have you drop by and share with me your thoughts/comments... Muaah on cheeks2uPoetFriend Serenity gurl and Temptress sweetie, sighhhhhhh I know just what you mean and I thank you both4 your words here just brought2surface a smile out in me this early morning...My heart hugz ya sweetPoetFriends... |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
Very well done. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Well hello there Effigy... Thank you bearry much 4your sweet comment PoetFriend... Smiles2u... *~coco~* |
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