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Unchained |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada 
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Unchained  A loving relationship, Knows not time nor, Falters at distance. Inside is freedom, To unmask and be, Known through and through. It grows deeper as each, One grows and learns. Real lovers are friends first. They each want, What is best , For the other, Even if it means taking, Second, stepping, Out, letting go.... They will always, Be there ready, To share new things: Joys, sorrows, cares, When they return. Ready to wish them well.... If they do not  Sherry Gardner as a side note.... I wrote this 16 years ago as my (now husband) then boyfriend and I were breaking up... Little did I know that love would come full circle then~~But here we are proof of the Unchained. Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. [This message has been edited by Magicmystery (04-13-2002 12:45 AM).] |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Love should most definitely begin with a good friendship. Well done, Sherry.  ~sky I'm in charge, and I say question authority! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, yes, yes, true love should always start as a friendship that is bound to last forever to have the opportunity to understand the person fully in time and to love them for all they are! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sherry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sherry~ a wonderful write....this has a magic to it....  Lauren~ Step through the |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I don't know how I missed this one Sherry. It most certainly is a beautiful write... full of many many truths.... I too believe that a lasting relationship starts out as a trusting friendship... and grows from there...as yours did, with Wilfred. Very nicely worded and presented. ~Love & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MagicMystery~ What a lovely, lovely write and presentation~ How marvelous that it's also true~ A refreshing read~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
The real magic in life - Friendship and love. These things go hand in hand and your words portray it so beautifully! How neat to know that things in your life came full circle and this person who you were willing to accept and love became your lover. ** I am smiling ** This poem is precious. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I enjoyed this, and also your happy outcome epilogue Sandra |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sherry I know exactly this feeling. I even wrote a poem with just those words... coming full circle...and indeed love does have a way of doing that. great write, hugs. Like a red brick, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love to hear things like this...makes me believe there is hope afterall |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sherry, this is lovely! And YOU know that I'm lovin' those butterfly graphics! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Noah You charmer, thanks for your kind words. Lauren, Thankyou, funny you should "magic" He is a Magician too. Nancy, you know better than most what I am talking about here... thanks for taking a look. Glad you enjoyed it!!! Marge, Thank you for your kind words. Glad you liked it!!! Kim, I am truly blessed.... Wilfred was my first boyfriend (Mystic Mystron to all of you) Sandra, yes as most things do these days... Had to kiss alot of frogs though in the mean time...LOL Yes, Gentle Spirit, coming full circle is great!!! Thank you Dixie, there Is always hope!!!! Thank you Melissa, dear. I appreciate the compliment.... If you go to the link page on my website you will find the source of my butterfly netting {had to do that} Happy hunting!!!  Love, Light and Peace, Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. [This message has been edited by Magicmystery (05-01-2002 02:20 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Very sweet. |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Thank you Michael, that means a lot to me. Love, Light and Peace Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just wanted you to know I love your homepage, I'll have to go again and again! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderfully done. . . there are chains that never break. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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