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Why Did You Lie?
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Why Did You Lie? |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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Why Did You Lie? Why did you feel the absolute need to lie to me That's not how you achieve a friend, don't you see I offered you my understanding, to you I reached out my hand But now I find I was a fool, but no apologies will I demand Instead, I shall slowly dissapear from your life, and the lies you told You almost had me believing in you, but my hand you will never hold I wish that things were different, and you could have trusted me more However, what's done is done, and it's time to close this door I just don't understand for the life of me, why you felt you had to do this What happened in the short span of time, what did I miss? I hope that you learn a lesson from this pain you have caused me Don't worry though it's better I know this now, and can be set free You won't hear no angry words from my mouth, no I'll be silent and strong When you awake tomorrow though, you'll find the trails of me long gone You will probably wonder why, but in your heart you will know This lie you have told, caused me to let go "you can't stop the rain from pouring down can't stop the world from turning 'round can't stop me from loving you no matter what you do" [This message has been edited by Aimster (04-12-2002 09:38 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
However, what's done is done, and it's time to close this door Amy~ That line stood out from all the rest. It's an awful feeling wondering what we missed and how we could have been so blind. But what goes around comes around, and thank goodness that life goes on. I felt your pain and know these feelings, which doesn't help a whole lot when you're in that place. ~Warm hugs~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You won't hear no angry words from my mouth, no I'll be silent and strong When you awake tomorrow though, you'll find the trails of me long gone You will probably wonder why, but in your heart you will know This lie you have told, caused me to let go ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Very powerful emotions expressed here Amy. I do hope you are okay... but, it does help to write it out sweetie. Hugs. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy darling lil sis of my heart I forgive you for this wonderful piece, this is an absolutely fabulous poem from you. YOU as I’ve mentioned maybe one or twice are an absolutely fabulous writer. The power of these words are outstanding, I could feel the anger a the deceit radiating from this. Brilliantly written. Well done darling heart very well done As always Mushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Amy, this is so very sad, I hope this is not a current experience you are facing, but if it is, my heart goes out to you! (kiss on cheek) This is sad but powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing! Masy love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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