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Aimster
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0 posted 2002-04-12 06:40 PM


Their Love

From the beginning when she told me about you
I knew it was a love that was true
She gave you her heart, and you showed her loves light
I've been a witness to the most amazing sight

Your love for one another, shines brighter than any star
It doesn't matter whether you are together or apart very far
She tells me about you, and I can hear the smile a mile away
I know that you adore her, because you show her everyday

If I had a wish to make, I'd wish for your happiness forever
For I was the witness to a love that made two into one, fusing two lives together
I can't think of a love that has been any greater, much like Juliet and Romeo
Sometimes when love like this happens, you don't have to question...you just know

I am your alibi, to this happiness built from heaven above
I would testify that I was the witness to such an incredible love
When the time has come, and a new day comes into view
I'll pass along of this love that I knew

For now though, cherish each other like I know that you do
Be good to yourselves, continue to love each other true
I stand in the shadows as her friend, and I wish you both the very best
I am proud to say you've both passed with flying colors, love's test

This is for a very dear friend of mine, to her and her soulmate...*Cheers*

~Amy~

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

© Copyright 2002 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-12 06:44 PM




YAY!!! (cheers in delight) Oh Amy, I too wish for the best happiness to your dear friends forever and ever, sweet friend, may they share a true love together to last a lifetime! (kiss on cheek) This is a fabulous gift for their joy, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-04-12 09:20 PM


Amy this is wonderful!
And a gift that your friends will surely treasure!
~hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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3 posted 2002-04-12 10:07 PM


Amy darling lil sis of my heart Oh my stars how utterly utterly wonderful is this write of yours. Utterly utterly one of your utter best. YOU darling heart are a writer a really fabulous writer I love it the flow is divine the form pretty near perfect, it’s beautiful the true reflection of love, to see what is and what is really there despite appearances

This is a truly magnificent gift for your dear friends I can see them treasuring this their whole lives through. Truly beautifully written

Absolutely excellent I love it utterly

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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4 posted 2002-04-13 01:50 AM


such sweetness in your words....you tell their love story beautifully
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5 posted 2002-04-13 02:06 AM


Oh amy this just touched the rite place in me2nite to read such beautiful expression from your heart...
Thank you so very much4sharing this with us...
Hugs2uAlwaysDearPoetFriend...
*~coco~*

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6 posted 2002-04-13 04:00 AM


you always write deep from the heart
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2002-04-13 03:20 PM


"I would testify that I was a witness to such an incredible love."....Lovely...James
peaches73533
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8 posted 2002-04-13 03:26 PM


This is an amazing thing to witness and a treasure your friends will always remember.
You are a true friend.
Peaches

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