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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-04-12 12:33 PM


When I step alone...I sense you there..
Beside me, each stride, each thought.
Your shadow is my own, you are me.
Touch me softly with a strand of hair

Dreams carry me to your waiting kiss
Your eyes glisten, the mist veils them
I touch your hand, you tell me, again.
Love found once, eternally do miss.

From where do I come and then depart
Stumbles on jagged rocks of life await
Staggered gait of load burdens my life
as words cherished are then torn apart

Love me, let me into the soul of mind
Take me, with words I seek to find.
Hold me, treasure the softest of touch
Know me, that I do...will give so much.

© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-04-12 12:44 PM


Magnus,
I'm sure it will, enjoyed.

Duncan
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2 posted 2002-04-12 12:45 PM


From where do I come and then depart
Stumbles on jagged rocks of life await
Staggered gait of load burdens my life
as words cherished are then torn apart

Really enjoyed this write, Barry.  Related much.

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3 posted 2002-04-12 12:48 PM


Your shadow is my own, you are me.
Touch me softly with a strand of hair''


thats the touch of softest passion...well done Barry... enjoyed as always....


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2002-04-17 01:09 AM


Magnus~

'I touch your hand, you tell me, again.'

Certainly says it for me~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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5 posted 2002-04-17 02:34 PM



My mind imagines you
with pad in lap, pen
in hand, studying a
pile of rocks in write
leaving behind tear
stones of words...

thank you for this

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6 posted 2002-04-17 06:08 PM




BRAVO!!! Again your passion glistens in your remarkable words, sweet friend, may love always touch your heart with rapture! (big huggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is superb! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2002-04-17 06:16 PM


Magnus darling boy oh how well this is written the promise of the eternal love absolutely perfect I love it very well written piece here You know I love this, it’s flow and rhyme were and are utterly utterly divine, YOU darling heart always write well. This is utterly utterly wonderful as always you excel in everything you write


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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8 posted 2002-04-17 06:45 PM


enjoyed
Enchantress
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9 posted 2002-04-17 08:32 PM


Barry, you sure do know how..
to make a woman melt, now don't you??!!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

BluesSerenade
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10 posted 2002-04-17 11:25 PM


Oh this is just so lovely Magnus.
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful!!!

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11 posted 2002-04-18 01:17 PM


Love found once, eternally do miss.

How very true. *S* I like this very much, Magnus... it's flowing tenderly right into my library. *S*

rwood
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12 posted 2002-04-18 10:18 PM


This is perfectly curl up and sigh stuff...I enjoy your voice in this..

Sincerely,
Regina

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13 posted 2002-04-18 10:26 PM


Magnus...This was just incredibly beautiful. You are such a romantic writer. I love the way you phrase those love thoughts and memories.   ***Ivy Rose
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14 posted 2002-04-18 11:01 PM


Magnus, this is a lovely poem and I loved the flow of this.
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