navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #20 » Morning, My Love
Open Poetry #20
Post A Reply Post New Topic Morning, My Love Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Scots Gent
Junior Member
since 2002-01-20
Posts 17
In a Lover's Heart

0 posted 2002-04-12 12:05 PM


Rolling bands of blue & white
Bring forward a brand new day
Hope & beauty in this new birth
Optimism slowly leads the way

Invincible I am, as the sun softly rises
Another chance to make wrongs right
An end to the injustice of dark
A crisp beginning to end a long night

What wonders await me out there?
What more beautiful sights to see?
A soaring swallow breaks my vision
A silhouette on my mind's tapestry

Fresh air, cool morning air
Awakens my lungs with a start
Earth lightly covered with dew
Which only day's warmth can part

How much you can notice
When you are truly alive
Life taken for granted
'Til you finally arrive

None of these things have much meaning
If not with a lover they can be shared
Whether by my side or in my thoughts
Forever my love, we are paired


Life is too short, supersize it - SG

[This message has been edited by Scots Gent (04-12-2002 12:06 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Stephen Colquhoun - All Rights Reserved
Decaflame
Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635

1 posted 2002-04-12 12:06 PM



This brings welcome smiles...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-04-12 12:18 PM


*smiling here*...wonderful writing!
Enjoyed so much today...
I always look for your work...
it is very well done.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
3 posted 2002-04-12 12:39 PM




(big hugggssssss) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may all your time be spent and cherished with the one you love! (smiles) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stephen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


Ladyhawke
Member
since 2001-09-01
Posts 86

4 posted 2002-04-12 05:48 PM


Excellent poem.  Excellent message.
Rodney Belcher
Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227
Taylor, Michigan
5 posted 2002-04-14 10:59 AM


Good job gent...nice sentiment...Rod

Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod

Ivy Rose
Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300
MA, USA
6 posted 2002-04-14 02:29 PM


Scots Gent...MARVELOUS POEM!!!! All the beautiful and tenders expressions of love captured by your words.  ***Ivy Rose
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2002-04-14 03:04 PM


Enjoyed...James
kat
Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387

8 posted 2002-04-14 04:55 PM


This is just so beautiful!  When we're with the one we love, everything around us is ecstasy!  I really loved this one!

kat

RosePetal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985
South Florida
9 posted 2002-04-14 07:47 PM


this is the first poem ive ever read of yours, and let me just say that i found it to be sooo beautiful.
ill be looking for more!

rp

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #20 » Morning, My Love

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary