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0 posted 2002-04-12 10:33 AM



Heart broken
Broken?
No, just bruised
Too many emotions
Pounding upon
Raging within....
It’s too damn early
To have to replay
Last night’s dream
Over and over
Seeing you in the rain
Leaving it once again
Unfinished
Words unspoken
Leaving my soul
Submerged in ‘why’
My need to understand
Hurts almost as much
As this love for you
That now I can only give
In dreams


~SEA~



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1 posted 2002-04-12 10:36 AM


hugs my friend...
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2 posted 2002-04-12 10:37 AM



Go back to bed, SEA, and finish the dream...

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3 posted 2002-04-12 10:42 AM


Ron, thank you

Soleil, I woke up at around 3 am, getting back just wasn't an option....no matter how hard I tried... thank you



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4 posted 2002-04-12 10:48 AM


SEA sad and yet hopeful..
I live for the dreams
enjoyed you here

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5 posted 2002-04-12 10:51 AM


DS, I don't see any hope here....only missing someone in my heart...dreams sometimes can be really unfair, thank you
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6 posted 2002-04-12 11:01 AM


Susan,
So here's to better dreams...and I'm sorry for your loss! Well done, btw.

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7 posted 2002-04-12 11:20 AM




(big huggggssss) This is so very sad, sweet friend, I know just how you feel for I dream of my dream girl Joanna all the time and I long to meet her and love her outside my dreams forever! (kiss on cheek) This is powerful, sweet friend, may true love come to you always outside your dreams, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2002-04-12 11:24 AM


thank you Larry

Noah, you are such a sweetie, thank you

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9 posted 2002-04-12 02:27 PM


Dreams may be unfair, but is reality just as unfair sometimes?

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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10 posted 2002-04-12 03:10 PM


It’s too damn early
To have to replay
Last night’s dream

There ya go, runnin' around my head again.  

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11 posted 2002-04-12 03:32 PM


Romeo, yes, for sure....thank you

Cowboy, it's only fair, you do it to me all the time thank you

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12 posted 2002-04-12 05:35 PM


people like us need to give love to feel alive and complete. May you find someone who you can love outside of dreams...(and when you do, ask him if he has a brother for me)
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13 posted 2002-04-12 06:58 PM


beauiful sentiments of your
heart sweetie...even though it
was sad and made my heart cry for
you...i know that as you continue
to write of these feelings, your heart
will begin to eventually feel the
release of pain and you will smile
once again...just watch and see.

love ya.
amy

take care...and if you need a shoulder,
feel free to talk to me.

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

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14 posted 2002-04-12 08:31 PM


there is no rest for the 3 am ache ...
no sleeping when it rolls in.
only the muses and moths are up at that hour...
at least youre in good company then.

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15 posted 2002-04-12 08:35 PM


SEA~

I know the haunting memories at that dreadful hour in the AM...too many times, to awaken knowing the dream was gone, yet hopeful the dream will live on in heart...Peace to you....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

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16 posted 2002-04-12 08:42 PM


thank you sweet ladies....
that is an ache that will never die...
*sigh*
one day at a time, right?

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17 posted 2002-04-12 08:45 PM


I know this feeling!
Very well expressed Sue.
~Hugs~

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18 posted 2002-04-13 01:25 AM


(((hugs)))

me

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