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Her Silent Thoughts
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Her Silent Thoughts |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Her Silent Thoughts You seem like one that makes loving an art form... by taking away the act, turning it into a play, love-lights coming from the moon and stars, encoring scenes into standing ovations by the flowered patterns on awe-struck walls, where iris eyes would blink, wondering at mother's nature... [there is a poem in there] the morn wonders if her sunstreams should hide from view a little longer, secretly circumspect behind the hills just a few more seconds, until by axis only, sun has to come in to gleam on morning skin... meeting light’s match when one finds a romantic, one who knows that finding a right word that turns into those silences easily... one finds nothing is taken for granted... if only by word to know [now] that one man can encompass this luxury... then it is to know that touch, and I would have you bring that touch ... here... where warmth now flows from what once thought had been left to dry in the dust bowl... every now and then the midwest goes arid... grit grinds and skin desiccates... but now and then, after a few years of dry, spring rains bring a dance of lush to the plains and I stand now in your spring rain face cupped between your hands until your lips hold mine and your hands explore the slight hills and valleys the midwest has to offer... grateful that the drought has ended… |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
on a roll with this one... indeed a nice piece of work. the images and flow both sensual and felt... my compliments. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Very, Very soft and smooth - Like a summer rain. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Soleil Imagery devine mixed with a sensual metaphor, so well done. The earth has such treasure for a poet, yes! |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Love is indeed an art form. The moon and stars, the sun at my hands. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sensually soft...and pleasurable...yet deep as well...enjoyed this... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes, there is a poem in there my friend. . . excellent. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
yes...enjoyed this midwest snapshot and the promise of and end of the drought sensual and alive |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
but now and then, after a few years of dry, spring rains bring a dance of lush to the plains and I stand now in your spring rain face cupped between your hands until your lips hold mine and your hands explore the slight hills and valleys the midwest has to offer... grateful that the drought has ended… ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Wonderful writing here! Enjoyed so very much. ~Hugs~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
if only by word to know [now] that one man can encompass this luxury... then it is to know that touch, and I would have you bring that touch ... here... ====================================\ HOW DID I MISS THIS??????????? Well...tis mine now...i am taking it for my own and me thanks you... me thanks you muchly  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Indeed a poem in there, very nice work Sol.. Like a red brick, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wow do I love that ending *s beautifully done M |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much, Soleil... especially the ending. *S* Very soft and sensual images, excellent metaphor. *S* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'm putting this one in my library, and whenever I feel a drought of love and kindness, I'll take this out to read, remember, and be refreshed. Thank you. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
so many great lines ... can't even go there Bravo... ~~ Connie ~~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
soon the drought shall end love springs blossoming to life the petals await |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh yes...James |
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