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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-04-12 07:44 AM



His Startling Revelation

Goodbye from a friend
A announcement made
The startling revelation
Had left me dismayed

All the happy moments
Cherished and shared
Opening up our hearts
Our souls were bared

He says it is now time
From  paths to depart
Breaking  a friendship
Now tears at my heart

A friend sharing friend
Seems like yesterday
Then you severed ties
In closure you display

Poems and memories
With heart dedication
Then the note arrived
Friendship termination

Without giving reason
A heart falls in demise
My eyes fill with tears
Why a friendship dies

HopeĀ© 2002

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-04-12 09:09 AM


HopeS,
A lovely sad write. Well done.

HopeS
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2 posted 2002-04-12 09:51 AM


Thanks for you sweet kind reply Seymour
Hope

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3 posted 2002-04-12 12:49 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Hope, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you! (kiss on cheek) Know you are loved by many always and we will always be your friend, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Elan
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4 posted 2002-05-03 10:42 PM



Amazing
how they
go, just
like that

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