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ecrivan
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0 posted 2002-04-11 08:14 PM



peaks o'er waterlines,
mountains mirrored from the depths
rock and water meet.


© Copyright 2002 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-11 08:30 PM


Excellent one Martin!
Enjoy your writing much...
Need more time to read in here.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

ecrivan
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2 posted 2002-04-11 08:51 PM


thankyou Nancy,

alot comes from just putting the visual into words


Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-04-11 09:27 PM


A beautiful description, Martin.

~lots of hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

ecrivan
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4 posted 2002-04-11 09:30 PM


much appreciated, Lyra


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5 posted 2002-04-11 11:06 PM


ecrivan...OUTSTANDING HAIKU!!! Really was WOWED!!!  ***Ivy Rose
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I am SO glad I did not miss this...

ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2002-04-12 10:31 PM


Nature is a beautiful teacher...rock and water meet, like men and women. I like this.
ThisDiamond

ecrivan
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9 posted 2002-04-13 01:10 AM


Diamond,

One can read of the strength and grace of the opposite sexes in this.


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10 posted 2002-04-13 10:06 PM




YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is a fabulous haiku, sweet friend, I just love how you depict nature through words, I love the mountains and know this majestic sight so very well! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


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11 posted 2002-04-14 01:53 AM



What a gorgeous description, bravo!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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12 posted 2002-04-14 08:57 PM


Ecrivan~
This is lovely imagery, simplistically stated~
VERY nicely done~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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ecrivan
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13 posted 2002-04-14 10:11 PM


Marge,

it is quite simplistic and I do Haiku occasionally too

Melissa,

thanks for buzzing in


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