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Krissy
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0 posted 2002-04-11 06:41 PM


Circles

Within the sigh of eye
You touch me
Still my will
Bending unending
Eternal I become one
To flow so
Into this bliss
Being freeing
From then to when
Until the still
Of me

Inside the why of my
You go so
Without
Thought sought
Melding meshing
Completing repeating
Over and over
I am I can
Releasing unceasing
To see me
Be

Inner peace release
The hole of soul
Replete complete
The much of such
In take the stake
Of heart impart
The circle is found
All round
And so the
Who of you
Begins again
Without the pain
I sigh

Krissy



And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

© Copyright 2002 Krissy P J Searle - All Rights Reserved
ecrivan
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1 posted 2002-04-11 06:57 PM


Got a good sense of the circle of love through your coupled words here and there...liked this read


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2 posted 2002-04-11 07:03 PM


Round and round it goes....never ending...
such is the circle of love...Nicely done
Krissy...

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3 posted 2002-04-11 08:04 PM




(smiles) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, may your heart forever dance in circles of joy and may love and laughter continue to come your way through the cycle of loves dance! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krissy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ShadowRider
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4 posted 2002-04-11 08:46 PM



Krissy, Evening young Miss!  *smiles*

Circles
within the circle, a finite space
outside the arc, infinite is erased
it is a soul-sigh song so sweet
that when curved toward each other
will finally meet

for you, my fine Krissy,
jeff

Kethry
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5 posted 2002-04-12 09:55 AM


perfect, unending and complete.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Silver Streak
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6 posted 2002-04-12 08:52 PM


Hi Krissy,

Another lovely poem by you, sweet one. You got me running in circles, again.

((Krissy))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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7 posted 2002-04-12 09:02 PM


mushy, you better watch your back. Krissy is gaining rapidly....
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8 posted 2002-04-12 09:04 PM


...Perfectly beautiful...

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9 posted 2002-04-12 10:33 PM



This looped me well, Krissy...I like your free verse style...

Madame Chipmunk
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10 posted 2002-04-12 11:22 PM


Inner peace release
The hole of soul
Replete complete
The much of such
In take the stake
Of heart impart
The circle is found
All round
And so the
Who of you
Begins again
Without the pain
I sigh

Beautiful job, Krissy...it sounds like a poetic mobius strip.
~hugs going round and round~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2002-04-17 01:27 AM


Krissy~
A sweet turn of thoughts here~
I LOVE circles~

'The circle is found
All round
And so the
Who of you
Begins again
Without the pain
I sigh'


Sweet, sweet~
*HUGS*
~*Marge Tindal*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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