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Excalibur
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Excalibur |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Please love me for who I am For what I'm about to be And for my unfolding destiny Please be there when I cry at night And wake up dripping with fright Hold me tenderly in your arms And whisper a sweet lullabye of words Ending and fighting the demons off just like Excalibur Can't you tell that I've been alone too long Drifting off in the dark Waking up constantly Dreaming between fantasy and reality As my candle light flickers in the night Dancing and prancing amongst the twilight And the shadows clutching at my mind So please love me if you can Never leave me and keep me safe from harm For I'm beggining to think that I am spell bound And that your words are as mighty as King Arthur's sword... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely said....and I thought the last line was simply perfection! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may he always be the King Arthur of your heart and offer you chivalrous love and cleanse all your tears away with his trusts sword! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
If we could only make things happen the way we would like them to! It's a roll of dice that simply land no matter how we shake em up! Anyway, I liked the way you expressed yourslf. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Ceinwyn, that was very neatly done, I like it a lot. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh... I like this very much!!! *S* Well done! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . . I like this image very much. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic....James |
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