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imagine315
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0 posted 2002-04-11 06:34 PM


He steps off the side,
toward the light he walks,
Looking both ways before each stop.
Time mixes with the lengths of confusion-
Confusion-
Each day breaks a new piece,
Taken only by those who know not to forget.

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1 posted 2002-04-11 07:56 PM




(big hugggssssss) This is indeed a kind of emotion we can all relate to, sweet friend, may we all strive to learn and find the answers within the confusion and piece the puzzle together and never forget the opportunities we can have! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-04-11 08:51 PM


Finding that balance is a fine line,
we can either hang on or let go...
and then what?  

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3 posted 2002-04-12 05:41 AM


I'm a Libra and I haven't found balance yet Nice poem, I enjoyed it
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