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imagine315
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0 posted 2002-04-11 06:12 PM


Forever seems like it ended yesterday
With the silence of the rain,
Still I place this forgotten peril
With the dreams of today
Forming along each drop of eternity.

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1 posted 2002-04-11 07:51 PM




(big hugggssssss) This is indeed very powerful, sweet friend, may you now look ahead to hope and promises and find serenity and pleasantness in the rain with joy! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-04-13 09:06 AM


This is excellent! A lot of power packed into a few lines. I enjoyed this.
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3 posted 2002-04-13 10:02 AM


i liked this yuh
ecrivan
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4 posted 2002-04-13 11:41 AM


perils unforgotten..cool stuff

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (04-13-2002 11:43 AM).]

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5 posted 2002-04-13 12:17 PM


Hopeful and nicely said Imagine~
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