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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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The scarlet tattoo of her lips inhales the air he breathes with gloss of faithfulness and a sheen of love within her eyes she combs his chestnut hair with savory enameled nails and scent of jasmine awakening the thrill of seduction tracing with delight his invisible ink with her warm heart of passion "If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare) [This message has been edited by Victoria (04-11-2002 04:00 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Awakening the thrill of seduction." Lovely thoughts...James |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I would say the man is lucky.... nicely done my friend... sensually woven to leave intrigue and the hint of promise... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OH Victoria, you write the most passionate words.....such a scene in one's eyes.. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well, this is most delicious. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are always flooding with such magical passion and sensuality and crystal-clear imagery! (kiss on cheek) This is dazzling, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
wow..what an awakening!!Lucky guy  |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~V~ Very lovely indeed, I love how you write passion, you just seem to glow when doing so...) HUGSSS Lauren~ Step through the |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful and sensual Victoria~ I think I'll go and put some of my 'harlot red' lipstick on~ Yes! Spring has come to Passions! ...and everyone is feeling it. ~Hugs~ |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
mmmm someone's tongue patterns make sensual lipcoverings for a lucky lady...... love the way you did this, Vic. ~rsisting temptation to lick my lips in the wind~ jeff *smile* |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
tracing with delight his invisible ink with her warm heart of passion I love the sensuality in this one, Victoria  ~lots of hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you James..always nice hearing from you hugs Ron..thank you ..i have enjoyed your sensual poems too..hugs Thank you Barry..ha...you inspire me to write more..hugs sandra..thank you hon..glad you like..nice hearing from you today..hugs Noah dear..thank you for your lovely responses  ecrivan..haa..yes i agree hugs Lauren..thank you..that was so nice of you to say..hugss Nancy..thank you for peeking in ..yes spring has finally got here haa...hugss to ya Jeff..thank you for that delicious response mmmm hugss Lyra dear..great hearing from you as always..always a treat to see you peek in hugss |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Definately a luscious, lip-licking treat to read and enjoy, very nice! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Hiya Dulcie...so nice of you to stop by today..hope you have a great weekend..hugss |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I could feel those nails going through my hair (although I have left chestnut behind a long, long time ago!) very nicely done, Victoria |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Oh was that you deery?? haa..now i remember |
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