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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-04-11 09:56 AM



tender strings have bound
my heart for such a long time
will love loosen them

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Decaflame
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1 posted 2002-04-11 09:58 AM



absolu....

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2 posted 2002-04-11 10:07 AM


Interloper
I think it will tighten them. LOL

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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-04-11 10:08 AM


...Perhaps...

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4 posted 2002-04-11 10:10 AM


I think perhaps the strings may entangle you more...


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5 posted 2002-04-11 10:10 AM


strings attached to heart
will just make you trip and fall
careful...love can hurt

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The Shores of Alone
6 posted 2002-04-11 10:55 AM


Hm.. what Sea said..
I like this.
Sandra

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7 posted 2002-04-11 11:02 AM


Bob darling boy this is gorgeous, now I’m going to attempt one, so stand back and give me room, I will probably fall over and I don’t want to hurt anyone when I trip over my lip as it were

Tender love touch me
Bind me with your certainty
Strings of love free me


Well how is that? Apart from being hard work and all over the place I mean. Your writing however is perfect poetry

Love and light

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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Deep in the heart
8 posted 2002-04-11 11:16 AM


Decaflame ~
Than

Sy ~
Ya think?

Enchantress ~
Maybe?

Ron ~
Like ensnaring?

SEA ~
love can truly hurt
yet one must venture forward
else love will be lost

Sandra ~
what SEA said was good
but you should read what I said
your prescription dear

Marsha ~
HOORAY!  A wonderful, delightful senryu.  I loved it

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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9 posted 2002-04-11 11:28 AM


InterLoper~

Puppeteer pulls strings
Gently dance upon my heart
Stage for your sweet love~


*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 2002-04-11 11:57 AM


you must loosen them
these soft strings that bind your heart
love will then flow through

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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Deep in the heart
11 posted 2002-04-11 01:07 PM


Marge ~
you have set the stage
now open your arms for me
I will sashay in

SK ~
a river runs through
love flowing in a torrent
current carries me

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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12 posted 2002-04-11 01:10 PM


the pain can be good
when it's love that binds your heart
tie me with your strings

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Deep in the heart
13 posted 2002-04-11 01:15 PM


SEA ~
be a masochist
there's no need for whips and chains
love's pain will suffice

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