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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 04-11-2002 05:38 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger

on the cliffside in our place town
where the villa is our castle
and the beach is sugar sand
that doesn't cling to skin

you are barefoot on marble floors
you wear the veiling of whispers
and my eyes, nothing more
except the perhaps of a smile

I strum guitar sambas
you sway your responce in skin rhythm
you wear my eyes as hands there
and find the gauze too confining

the guitar is quiet now
our music is our breathing
we enlace in lover's pose
fitting our togethers together

I love the scent of you
when your woman makes water
on her skin and when her eyes
are like glass with desire

when you promise me your soul
if I will just take you again
over the edge of our wall
where you can see the ocean below

and feel heaven whispering behind

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


1 posted 04-11-2002 07:09 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Now there's a story in glass eyes...good morning...well done...
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 04-11-2002 07:28 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

morning ms sunshine..
thank you for stopping by
may I offer you a sip of chai
and a escort along the gypsy tides

thanks lady
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla


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Dark Stranger
You paint with a broad palette knife and strong colors. But I enjoy the result.
Cpat Hair
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4 posted 04-11-2002 08:18 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

You do indeed paint the images so that the reader may draw from the results what they would... as usual, I enjoyed the read and the thoughts.

Janet Marie
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and the beach is sugar sand
that doesn't cling to skin

you are barefoot on marble floors
you wear the veiling of whispers
and my eyes, nothing more
except the perhaps of a smile

I strum guitar sambas
you sway your responce in skin rhythm
you wear my eyes as hands there
and find the gauze too confining
===================================
I love the scent of you
when your woman makes water
on her skin and when her eyes
are like glass with desire
==================================


mmm mmm mmm ....
DS...you strum the reader the same way you do that guitar.
there are so many cool lines and images and analogies in this sultry beauty....all I can do is re-read and tan in the warm of your words
Dark Stranger
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Sy, thanks for your comments much appreciated guy

Cpat, arrigoto for the review and re's

Janet Marie, will imagine the tan of you
and the eyes that smile..
thank you
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


7 posted 04-11-2002 08:46 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

To leave the reader
with smiling eyes
and trembling hands
so early in the sun
is a talent indeed..
Enjoyed, is not the word
I am searching for.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 04-11-2002 09:24 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

enchanting 1, thank you for your words
and thoughts this early morning
Victoria
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9 posted 04-11-2002 10:36 AM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

I love the way your words are stirring my steamy coffee this morning haa..

                  ~Victoria
Martie
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DS

It would be fun to play in sugar sand.  What a vision you create.  It's not Newport, must be your fertile imagination's word place.
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The Shores of Alone


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Whew, very warm poem, I can only imagine the happiness of a woman who has such written to her.
Sandra
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where the sky and horizon meet


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"the guitar is quiet now
our music is our breathing
we enlace in lover's pose
fitting our togethers together"


*sigh* I could play in the sugar sand of your words all day....more more!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Pilgrimage
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This is so very nice. Romance can be intoxicating.

Nan

Janet Marie
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*library*
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside


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Sounds like a shangrila to me!
Loved the marble floors and the way the whispers carry down the hallways.
Nice place DS~
Dark Stranger
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16 posted 04-12-2002 07:11 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Victoria, thank you sexy lady, I appreciate you.

Martie..kind of a place in mexico and laguna blended..thank you babe...enjoy your reads

Catmoon, you would look good there...that dark hair and the pale sand..thanks for coming by

Smittykitty...kick off you shoes..let those toes wriggle in the warm..thank you

Pilgrimage, thank you for the visit

Blues..thank you sweet lady..you must have been to such a place..at least a dozen time..
malibu perhaps...
Janet Marie
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dont mind me...Im just a moth flying in the pretty blue flame  lol

drop by and see us sometime groovy guy!!
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