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SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet

0 posted 2002-04-10 10:15 PM


I watched two eagles
soaring the sky;
lovers in a magical dance
With grace that stops your breath -
they encircled one another
With absolute focus their eyes
read each other's souls
And when I feared they would
remain there forever
one tilted its wing,
caught a wind current
and they flew side by side
into the horizon

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

© Copyright 2002 Krista C. - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-04-10 10:23 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile and flood with such love and smiles! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krista, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

brianbeaudry
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2 posted 2002-04-10 10:27 PM


wonderful poem and subject...the magestic eagle in effortless flight...one of my favorites!!!
ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2002-04-10 10:55 PM


Freedom of the eagles...excellent choice.
ThisDiamond

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Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-04-10 10:58 PM


Krista this is beautiful!
Fantastic imagery...
*I didn't know you were in southern Ontario where I am..
until I noticed the comment on Brian's post*
WOW!  ~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Skyfire
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5 posted 2002-04-11 01:08 AM


*smiles* That is beautiful! Thank you for those images! Wow...
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6 posted 2002-04-11 08:22 AM


they are amazing to watch..and you captured it quite well..


Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2002-04-11 08:39 AM


spirits in flight
the eagles
on wind and wing

you do this well smittykitty
enjoyed it

catalinamoon
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8 posted 2002-04-11 11:10 AM


Beautiful image you painted here.
Sandra

SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet
9 posted 2002-04-11 11:49 AM



SweetNoah~ Thank you as always for your ever-kind words   *hugs*

Brian~ Yes, they are a poem just waiting to happen!  Thank you for stopping in and leaving kind words.

Kathleen~ There is so much freedom in flight...I wish I could soar through the clouds too!  Thank you for reading and leaving me your thoughts.

Nancy~ Hey, I didn't know you were in Southern Ontario either!  Well we're practically neighbours!   Thanks so much for your kind words and the 'wow', made my day!  *hugs*

SkyFire~ Your smiles make me smile   thank you as well for the 'wow'!

Cat hair~ They are, they really are.  Thank you for peeking in!

DS~ Thank you for painting with me, it is an honour.  Hehe, smittykitty...I love that.

Sandra~ The eagles themselves are beautiful...they can take the credit!

Hugs to all!

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Pilgrimage
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10 posted 2002-04-11 12:27 PM


Wonderful image-wild and free.

Nan

Duncan
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11 posted 2002-04-11 02:31 PM


Beautiful image...well written!
Kethry
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12 posted 2002-04-12 10:00 AM


SmittenKitten,
wonderful imagery, I found myself holding my breath as I read through the piece.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet
13 posted 2002-04-12 10:27 PM



Pilgrimage~ Thank you kindly for the read and comment

Duncan~ Thank you tons!

Kethry~ Good thing it's a short poem!   thank you very much for stopping in

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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